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or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world. What’s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cleaning up trash while running. Every Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river. I can easily clean up trash such as plastic bottles, cans and so on . . I feel even better after returning from a run when I can do something that’s good for myself and my munity. Plogging shows how we are making the world a better place with a simple task. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文,要求結合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷,談談你對目前最環(huán)保的運動方式 (plogging) 的認識以及怎樣從身邊小事做起,做生態(tài)中國,健康中國的踐行者?!驹斀狻浚罕酒牧献魑囊笠缘谝蝗朔Q,談談自己對目前最環(huán)保的運動方式 (plogging) 的認識以及結合自己的日常生活經(jīng)歷,談談怎樣從身邊小事做起,做生態(tài)中國,健康中國的踐行者;陳述現(xiàn)階段的事情用一般現(xiàn)在時。書寫時要注意題干所給的提示材料,成文時要文句通順,內容完整。:本例文結構嚴謹,層次分明。開篇緊扣主題,介紹自己最喜歡的運動是跑步;正文部分順理成章的介紹plogging這種運動方式以及自己如何身體力行地做到鍛煉、環(huán)保兩不誤;結尾以. Everyone should be an environmental protection guard and take action to keep our home clean . To protect the earth is to protect ,總結全文。文章布局合理,內容完整連貫。:高分短語: so much ; all over the world; run along; take action to; keep ……clean .高分句型: enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. is the act of cleaning up trash while running . Sunday I wear plastic gloves and carry a garbage bag when I run along the river; protect the earth is to protect ourselves.【點睛】本篇材料作文書寫前要認真審題,確定人稱(第一人稱)和時態(tài)(一般現(xiàn)在時);關注題材的格式(記敘文),注意文章的篇章結構;書寫時要緊扣主題,做到中心突出,內容完整、連貫;成文后要檢查人稱、時態(tài)是否一致、單詞的拼寫是否正確、短語和句式的使用是否得當。8.(山東中考模擬) 寫作假定你是李華,在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學生家長的博客上,你看到以下內容。 請你根據(jù)博客內容,寫作要點和要求,給這位家長回復。 I’m the mother of a fourteenyear –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 寫作要點:1. 表明自己的看法。 2. 陳述自己的理由。3. 提出至少2條建議。【答案】Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in idea is that it is not quiteright for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some allA students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends39。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let herhave more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,對學生家長的博客進行回復。結合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構,注意一些常見句式的應用,比如:My idea is that……,There are……,Some allA students in school have…….,The reason is……,So I suggest that……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞,注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系。點睛:本文結構緊湊,語言簡練。開頭表明自己的看法,接下來陳述自己的理由,最后介紹自己的建議。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。9.(北京中考模擬)“ 業(yè)精于勤而荒于嬉, 行成于思而毀于隨” 。 良好的學習習慣是成功的一半, 只有擁有了良好的學習習慣, 學習才能得到提高。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學習習慣”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談談你是怎么做的,以及為什么這樣做。提示詞語: get ready for, take notes, on time提示問題: ●What do you do to develop your good learning habits in your daily life?●Why do you do so?As a middle school student,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As a middle school student, it39。s important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life:First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀:這是一篇提綱式作文。以“如何養(yǎng)成良好的學習習慣”為主題寫一篇英文稿件,主要談談自己的好的學習習慣。在寫作時,要根據(jù)提出的幾個問題為中心圍繞展開,再進行適當?shù)难由臁?. 例文點評:文章采用三段式,以總分總的形式將文章主題描述的清晰明了。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的觀點,語言層次感很強,表達準確。3. 高分亮點:短語:get ready for;take notes;on time;daily life;important points。句型:It is +adj. for sb. to do sth.;when引導的時間狀語從句。10.(安徽中考模擬)近來,美國總統(tǒng)特朗普的外孫女由于說一口流利的中文而成為“網(wǎng)紅”。你的美國朋友Sam 看過相關報道之后也很想學好中文,但是不知道該怎樣做。假如你是大明,請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一封郵件給他,提一些關于如何學好漢語的建議。要點提示 :,做好筆記。,與同學們用中文交流。、報紙等,在網(wǎng)上看一些中文語言類節(jié)目。注意 :。,以使行文連貫。,不計人總詞數(shù)。Dear Sam ,I39。m happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I