【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 【答案】How to Protect the EarthHello, everyone!The earth is our home, so we should protect it well.However it bees dirtier and dirtier: polluted rivers and lakes, growing deserts, the destruction of the forests and wildlife. All the bad things are the punishments from nature. It39。s time to take measures to protect the environment. First of all, close the factory and don39。t litter. Second, the method of saving water and electricity. Third, use shopping bags instead of plastic bags and try to take public transport. Fourth, recycling waste products and so on.I hope our home will bee better and better.Thanks for listening!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如dirtier and dirtier，the punishments from nature，It39。s time to do，first of all，the method of，instead of，try to do，and so on，better and better等。而First of all,/ Second,/ Third,/ Fourth,等詞語的運用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。9．（天津中考模擬）書面表達，有人選擇讀史書來了解歷史，你選擇哪種方法？理由是什么？請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文。方法理由看歷史劇情節(jié)有趣、通俗易懂；讀歷史書資料真實、引人深思；……（你的選擇）……（你的理由）要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（2）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。Many historical plays have been on TV 【答案】Many historical plays have been on TV recently. Some people like watching historical TV plays to know about history. They think they are interesting and easy 10 understand. Both the old and the young will have a lot of fun watching them.Some other people think another way to learn about history is to read books on history. They believe books can tell them the true stories. They can learn and think a lot from them while reading.I like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed and save me much time.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹人們通過什么方式來了解歷史。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用第一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。10．（山西中考模擬）書面表達請將作文寫在答題卡相應的位置上。在家庭生活中，我們會做很多關于我們青少年的決定，比如該買什么新年衣服，該怎樣慶祝生日，該上哪所學校等。你認為在我們自己的事情上應該自己做決定，還是聽從家長的意見？針對這一話題，九年級七班的同學們展開了辯論。假設你是正方或反方的一員，請圍繞你的觀點，結合自身的親身經(jīng)歷，說出2至3條理由來支持你的觀點。（只能選擇一方觀點表達。）要求：1. 詞數(shù)不少于80詞； 2. 文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。【答案】One possible version：At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們寫一篇議論文，論點是：在我們自己的事情上，我們應該自己做決定，還是由家長來做決定。關于這個話題每個人都會有自己的看法，題目要求我們?nèi)芜x一個觀點來講述，并結合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，給出2到3個理由。寫作之前，我們應先從正方和反方中選擇一個，作為自己的觀點，然后圍繞這一觀點闡述自己的理由。這是一篇話題作文，題目中并沒有給我們規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，我們應發(fā)揮自己的想象力，結合自己的日常生活來組織語言，豐富文章的內(nèi)容。寫作時還應注意的是語言的表達，英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，我們不能按照漢語思維，逐詞翻譯，而是從句子的整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型，多用簡單句，如主謂賓、主系表的結構，點綴幾個復合句或并列句，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，讓文章的句子富于變化，有新鮮感。高級句型或詞匯的使用也可以提升文章的檔次，在語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意表達連貫、流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，觀點明確，結構合理。短文作者選擇了正方的觀點，第一句話先點明自己的觀點是什么，接下來圍繞這一觀點進行闡述，并從自己的經(jīng)歷出發(fā)，闡述了自己持有這一觀點的理由，充分、合理，有說服力。最后一段作者重申自己的觀點，并進行了總結。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)、人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和一般過去時態(tài)為主，謂語動詞形式準確，語法規(guī)范。句式表達符合英語的表達習慣，簡單句為主，也使用了較多的復合句和高級句型，如狀語從句、賓語從句、定語從句、非謂語動詞等。有些句子較長，是由于使用高級句型所致，一味使用較長的句子也會導致文章的冗長，讓讀者感覺比較累，因此要注意調(diào)整文章的節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句型和短語有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it es to our personal 。11．（山東中考模擬） 書面表達 你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。（80詞左右）時間來到中國已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。旅游曾經(jīng)去過長城，故宮等名勝。喜好過去喜歡看科幻小說，現(xiàn)在對中國古典書籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。工作情況早晨8點起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時間練習漢語。夢想去很多不同的地方，了解中國文化，品嘗中國美食。I have a pen friend named Tom. 【答案】I have a pen friend named Tom. It has been two years since he came to China and worked in Beijing. And he has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of interest. He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 classics. He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare time. He teaches English in a middle school in Beijing. He works hard. He likes China. He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chinese food in the future.【解析】試題分析：本文是材料作文。你的的筆友Tom居住在北京，請根據(jù)表格中提供的信息，介紹一下他的情況。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文使用的時態(tài)有一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去式和現(xiàn)在完成時。寫作時，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯誤（時態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱：1. 來到中國已經(jīng)兩年了，在北京工作。It has been two years since he came to China and worked in . 曾經(jīng)去過長城，故宮等名勝。He has been to the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and other places of . 過去喜歡看科幻小說，現(xiàn)在對中國古典書籍很感興趣，已經(jīng)讀完了2本名著。He used to like to read science fictions. Now he is very interested in Chinese classical books and has read 2 . 早晨8點起床，乘坐地鐵去上班，空余時間練習漢語。He gets up at 8 . and takes the subway to work every day, and practices Chinese in his spare . 去很多不同的地方，了解中國文化，品嘗中國美食。He hopes to go to a lot of different places, know about Chinese culture and taste Chin