【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends. I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對(duì)現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，和同學(xué)們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。審題可知，文章中應(yīng)主要包括以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過(guò)去曾面對(duì)的壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。題目中只給出了大概的提綱，其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來(lái)補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。學(xué)生們可以從自身的經(jīng)歷和體會(huì)出發(fā)，選取生活中常見(jiàn)的場(chǎng)景進(jìn)行介紹。文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，并變化謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，這樣的句式表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)潔、明了，易于掌握。但為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對(duì)同學(xué)們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。短文有如下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)確。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，敘述清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔。也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)構(gòu)，如賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等。短文中使用了豐富的句式，如Some students can39。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。5．假如你叫李華，最近你班里的美國(guó)交換生Lucy想要感受中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化。周末你和父母商議后，打算邀請(qǐng)她去老舍茶館。你通過(guò)微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。提示詞語(yǔ)：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問(wèn)題：Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過(guò)微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我想要邀請(qǐng)你去老舍茶館，接下來(lái)介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁矗詈笾赋鑫覀円诤螘r(shí)何地見(jiàn)面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。6．自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂(lè)。擁有自信，人生處處是舞臺(tái)，生活越來(lái)越精彩。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你為校刊英語(yǔ)園地“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?，分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷，并說(shuō)說(shuō)我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。提示詞語(yǔ)：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing提示問(wèn)題：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如at th