【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear editor，I39。m very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the evening party．It will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock,on June 22n．I have planned three activities for it．First of a11，we would like to invite our teachers to e．We will give each other gifts and give our best that，one of the students will read a thankyou letter to all the people who have helped us．In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together． This is what we will do．I hope you will choose my plan．Yours，Li Ming【解析】【詳解】初中就要畢業(yè)了，校報(bào)“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)晚會(huì)的計(jì)劃。假定你是李明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫一封信，說說你的計(jì)劃。本題是一篇圖表作文，信息提示簡(jiǎn)潔明了，但是必要的補(bǔ)充和想象是必不可少的，切忌照信息翻譯句子，必須通過適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞保證文章通順，就本題而言，介紹三項(xiàng)活動(dòng)時(shí)，要有必要的順序詞．【點(diǎn)睛】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,如：After that，one of the students will read a thankyou letter to all the people who have helped us；In the end，some pictures will be shown to share the happy times we have had together．文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。9．（廣州市天河中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你?duì)“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識(shí)。提示：1. 出行方式2. 不浪費(fèi)紙、水、電等3. 其他低碳生活的方式（補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）4. 低碳生活的作用注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順；3．文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名等相關(guān)信息。My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. ________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My lowcarbon lifeLowcarbon life is a kind of lifestyle. It’s a habit to save all the sources of energy around us. It’s important to protect our environment. First, I always go to school on foot and tell my parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, I save water and electricity by turning off the taps , fans。 TV sets and lights in time when I don39。t need them. What39。s more, water is reused by us in my family all the time. Third, I use the both sides of the paper. I think it is good to make full use of paper. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, I would go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will bee better and better if we can do these things. Lower carbon, happier life. Let39。s take actions.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以My lowcarbon life為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕摹暗吞忌睢?，以及你?duì)“低碳生活”的認(rèn)識(shí)。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱主要為第一人稱。認(rèn)真閱讀所給提示要點(diǎn)，確定主題，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)列出提綱，所寫內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：我的低碳生活低碳生活是一種生活方式。節(jié)約我們周圍所有的能源是一種習(xí)慣。保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境很重要。首先，我總是步行去上學(xué)，告訴父母步行去上班，而不要開車。其次，當(dāng)我不需要的時(shí)候，我會(huì)及時(shí)關(guān)掉水龍頭、風(fēng)扇、電視機(jī)和電燈，以節(jié)約用水和用電。更重要的是，我們家里的水一直都在重復(fù)利用。第三，我使用紙張的兩面。我認(rèn)為充分利用紙張是件好事。通過這樣做，我們可以拯救許多樹木。最后，我會(huì)帶著籃子購物而不使用塑料袋。我相信如果我們能做這些事情，我們的生活會(huì)越來越好。低碳，快樂生活。我們采取行動(dòng)吧。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。語言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤，語法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取＃鹤⒁鈺鴮懝ふ烙^整潔。10．（廣東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是李明，你的英國(guó)筆友Jack來信詢問你的家鄉(xiāng)是否有霧霾天氣，情況如何。請(qǐng)你按照以下提示給他回一封。內(nèi)容如下：1. 由于大氣污染程度十分嚴(yán)重，去年已發(fā)生數(shù)次霧霾天氣；2. 人們已經(jīng)意識(shí)到霧霾天氣的危害，正在采取各種措施減少其發(fā)生；3. 你在日常生活中打算為此做些什么。參考詞匯：霧霾haze注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，信件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to receive your letter, and thank you for your caring for the weather and my health. Now I’d like to tell you something about the haze.The hazy weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown since last year. It was bad for our daily life. More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home .People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway.As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot. In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some good ideas? I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Ming【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給自己的英國(guó)筆友寫信，告訴他關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)霧霾的情況。題目中列出了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)提示，來組織語言，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。首先介紹去年家鄉(xiāng)的霧霾情況嚴(yán)重；然后介紹為減少霧霾人們采取了一些措施；最后介紹一下你自己在日常生活中應(yīng)該怎么做。因此文章應(yīng)主要分成三段，一個(gè)內(nèi)容一段。文章內(nèi)容中敘述的情況不一，時(shí)態(tài)不能統(tǒng)一，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，寫完整的句子，利用簡(jiǎn)單句的基本句型，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。為提升文章檔次，可以穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句；語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者根據(jù)題目要求介紹了自己家鄉(xiāng)治理霧霾的情況，并結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際情況，講述了自己日常生活中是如何做的。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)；且文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，分成了三段，每一段的中心明確，意思表達(dá)清楚、明了。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過去時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。短文中語言得體，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了一些并列句和復(fù)合句，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏。短文中較好的句式有More and more people have to go to see the doctor due to the serious diseases caused by the haze、People all over the country are taking measures to reduce the hazy weather now. 、The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport, such as the bus and the subway、In addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect the 。11．（全國(guó)中考模擬）共享單車（shared bikes）在廈門投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，它是國(guó)民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)。諸多優(yōu)勢(shì)，出行方便，減少污染，負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問題你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為……（考生自擬，