【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 stly, we can see the beautiful scenery and get to know the different cultures. Secondly, our parents are too busy, so it’s difficult for them to acpany us all the time, we have to learn to look after ourselves. Traveling is a good way to train our selfcare capacity. But we need to get ready to deal with something unusual that may happen during the trip. But considering the safety, we must make plans in advance. Take notes of some important selfhelp knowledge. All in all, traveling alone is good.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題議論文?！驹斀狻坑⒄Z(yǔ)作文一般分為三部分：第一部分：闡明論點(diǎn)。解讀“煩惱墻”內(nèi)容并陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)——青少年應(yīng)該被允許獨(dú)自旅行。第二部分：主體部分。分條逐一闡明理由并提出合理的相關(guān)建議。第三部分：再次重申論點(diǎn)。9．（安徽中考模擬）假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Johnson打算暑假來(lái)合肥玩，而合肥的夏天經(jīng)常持續(xù)高溫，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，告訴他防暑降溫的方法?！?清淡飲食； ● 合理休息； ● 適當(dāng)運(yùn)動(dòng)； ● ……注意: ；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；、學(xué)校名和地名；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Johnson Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack, Wele to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat. First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What39。s more, take some exercise properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat. I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇關(guān)于防暑的建議，所以寫(xiě)作時(shí)，比較多地用到表示建議的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建議時(shí)要條理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的詞。在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。寫(xiě)完后記得對(duì)文章檢查復(fù)合，避免單詞拼寫(xiě)及語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。本篇文章首先第一段對(duì)別人的到來(lái)表示歡迎，接著對(duì)合肥的天氣進(jìn)行總的描述，并引出下文自己的建議。第二段也是文章的主體部分。用first of all, Next, What39。s more, Finally,提出了四點(diǎn)建議，其中用到建議的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明，詞語(yǔ)及句型使用正確，很不錯(cuò)的一篇文章。10．（哈爾濱市第四十七中學(xué)中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是麗麗，還有不到100天就要中考了，今天為了讓我你們?cè)诰o張的學(xué)習(xí)之余得到放松，你們班召開(kāi)了一個(gè)主題為業(yè)余時(shí)間你最喜歡做什么的討論，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇日記，并談一下業(yè)余時(shí)間做運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)你的好處。 寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)： 1. 現(xiàn)在的狀態(tài)：為了中考努力學(xué)習(xí)。 2. 討論的結(jié)果。 （1）百分之四十的學(xué)生業(yè)余時(shí)間喜歡聽(tīng)音樂(lè)。 （2）百分之三十的學(xué)生喜歡業(yè)余時(shí)間打電腦游戲（3） 你和一些同學(xué)喜歡做運(yùn)動(dòng)。 寫(xiě)作要求： 。 2. 可適當(dāng)加人細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。 、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。 。 Dear Diary, Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. _________________【答案】Dear Diary,Today is less than 100 days from the Senior High Entrance Exam. Now we are studying for the senior high school entrance examination. Today we had a discussion about what do you like during the spare time.40% of the students are fond of listening to music. They strongly believe that it is a good way to make them relaxed. 30% of the students prefer playing puter games. As far as they’re concerned, playing puter games makes them more energetic.As for some students and me, we like doing exercise. Doing exercise is important for us to keep healthy. If we are healthy, we’ll have more chances to get good grades.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述同學(xué)們業(yè)余時(shí)間喜歡做的活動(dòng)以及運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如spare time, be fond of, strongly believe, make sb adj, as far as one’s concerned, keep healthy, have chances to do以及“主將從現(xiàn)”原則。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（江蘇中考模擬）假定你是David，來(lái)自美國(guó)，你的好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他來(lái)信向你了解有關(guān)這方面的情況。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和實(shí)際用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)，可以有適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。To: davidwoodlandschool@From: limingsunshineschool@Subject: VolunteeringDear David， I’m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I’m interested in it very much. I’m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know little about it. Could you help me answer the following questions? ●Why do you want to be a volunteer? ●What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? ●Do you have any problems with volunteering? ●If my parents don’t allow me to do so, what should I do? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes， Li Ming注意：。回復(fù)信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I39。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer yourquestions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, su