【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 s when I am in high school and can go to a good college.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以My Life At School為題，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。題目中利用表格的形式，展示了文章的具體內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們可以此為提綱進行寫作。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，注意根據(jù)表達需要使用正確時態(tài)，并注意謂語動詞的正確形式。內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：首先是初中三年里的美好回憶；然后是不開心的事情；最后展望自己未來的高中生活。表格中有非常具體的提示，但不能逐詞翻譯表格中的短語，應(yīng)把他們變成自己的話，并用英語表達出來。寫作時應(yīng)注意：文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進行補充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語的表達習(xí)慣，用完整的句子表達。句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜句式的使用，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，回憶了自己的初中生活，并展望了未來。短文有以下幾個特點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。短文分三段，第一段基本是題目中給出的開頭，作者使用一句話引出下文；第二段是主體，介紹了過去美好的回憶以及不開心的事情；最后一段對未來進行了展望。各部分內(nèi)容安排合理，有層次、有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動詞正確形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。語言準(zhǔn)確、得體，表達自然、流暢。短文中使用了豐富的句型和短語，如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of being an exchange students and spent two months in , we kept in touch with each other through s. Besides, I was not good at Chinese also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good 。8．（合肥市五十中學(xué)東校中考模擬） 誠信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，也是社會主義核心價值觀內(nèi)容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠信危機所困擾。上周末，他本來和Lingling相約一起去電影院看電影，但是他卻因為在家復(fù)習(xí)考試，把這件事忘了，直到第二天才想起來。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。請你就此事給校報投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”為題，內(nèi)容要點如下：簡述事件；談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ⒔oDaming一些建議。注意：詞數(shù)80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名； 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize（強調(diào)）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間，大明沒有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說自己對此的看法?！驹斀狻渴紫龋谝痪湓捴苯狱c明作者的觀點，大明是犯錯了的。然后仔細闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法，不信守承諾會導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯。【點睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。9．（河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開?！蔽覀兇蠖鄶?shù)人雖然微不足道,但也能有所作為。請以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of 為題用英語寫以寫一篇短文,描述你曾經(jīng)做過得引以自豪一件事情。要求:。 【答案】One thing I felt very proud ofI will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。作文是開放式的，題目中只給了主題，具體的寫作內(nèi)容，需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力去補充。審題可知，體裁是記敘文，記敘一件自己做過的事情，且是能讓自己感到自豪的，故文章應(yīng)使用一般過去時，人稱以第一人稱為主。短文應(yīng)由開頭、主體和結(jié)尾三部分組成，開頭引出話題；第二部分為中心，具體描述事情的過程；最后一部分簡要描寫一下自己的感受。寫作時應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用較常見、易于把握的簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，穿插使用并列句或復(fù)合句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等?；蚴褂闷硎咕洹⒎侵^語動詞、感嘆句等特殊句式結(jié)構(gòu)。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求描述了自己做過的一件引以為豪的事情。短文有如下幾個特點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實，敘述具體，詳細，作者描寫了自己做飯給媽媽慶祝生日這件事，符合題目要求。文章分三段，第一段用一句話引出話題；第二段詳細描寫了事情的過程；最后一段寫了自己的感受。結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，安排合理。其次短文里使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般過去時、第一人稱敘述，注意了謂語動詞過去式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞的過去式。語言得體，語法規(guī)范，句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了時間狀語從句、并列句、非謂語動詞等復(fù)雜句式結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型和短語有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。10．（浙江中考模擬）今年我國首次將高考作弊列入刑事處罰，稱為史上最嚴(yán)高考．此事引起社會廣泛關(guān)注．作為一名中學(xué)生，請你根據(jù)以下提示，就學(xué)生考試作弊這一話題，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ鞅仔袨閿y帶紙條或電子產(chǎn)品作弊原因 努力不夠，想考好；…你的觀點 …要求：1．詞數(shù)80100；開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)．2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．3．參考詞匯：examroom 考室examcheating 考試作弊 electronic products 電子產(chǎn)品 microearphones 微型耳機 peting environment競爭環(huán)境It39。s very mon for students to cheat in the exams．This year,our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of lawbroken behavior．It is reported that …_______【答案】It39。s very mon for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of lawbroken behavior．It39。s reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the examroom．Some students copy others39。 answers．What39。s more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，microearphones to pass on the answers． There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work hard．They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．In my opinion，it39。s dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it39。s unfair for other students．In order to create a fair peting environment，we should say NO to the examcheating．【解析】【詳解】高分句型一：Some students are