【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)校園欺凌的看法。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主語(yǔ)以及“比較級(jí)and比較級(jí)”。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8．（寧夏銀川二中中考模擬）假設(shè)你是李華。上周末你和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)郊游,大家玩的很開(kāi)心。請(qǐng)你通過(guò)將此活動(dòng)過(guò)程告知你的好友Tom，并簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要點(diǎn)如下：The trip to the Green FarmWhen4月22日早上8:00出發(fā)。下午5:00返回。Where學(xué)校大門(mén)口集合。綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)效游。How乘坐校車(chē)。What野炊、摘西紅柿，放風(fēng)箏等（至少提及三項(xiàng)活動(dòng)）?！璖afety tips不要到河里游泳；不要單獨(dú)行動(dòng)……:參考詞匯：get close to the nature（親近大自然）寫(xiě)作要求：詞數(shù)60－80；（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名或人名；所給的要點(diǎn)必須都用上；緊扣主題，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Dear Tom,How’s it going? Last weekend, I went to_______________ Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear TomHow’s it going?Last weekend ,I went to the Green Farm for a trip with my set off at 8:00 in the morning on 22nd came back at 5:00 in the met at the school went there by school bus . We had a piic,picked tomatoes,flied kites and so teacher told us not to swim in the river and do anything had a chance to get close to the had a good trip.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己上周末和同班同學(xué)去綠色農(nóng)場(chǎng)郊游,大家玩的很開(kāi)心。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。9．（北京中考模擬）從下面兩個(gè)題目中任選一題，根據(jù)中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫(xiě)作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的校名和姓名。題目①假如你是李華，明天下午2:00你要去參加“傳統(tǒng)文化才藝展示”活動(dòng)，因此不能上英語(yǔ)課。請(qǐng)用英文給你們的外教John寫(xiě)一張請(qǐng)假條，告訴他你要去干什么，為什么要參加這個(gè)活動(dòng)以及你保證按時(shí)完成作業(yè)。提示詞語(yǔ):traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help提示問(wèn)題:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?Why will you take this activity?How will you finish your homework?Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence from your English ______________________________________________________________Your loring student Li lHua題目②一位好老師，勝過(guò)萬(wàn)卷書(shū)。在你的初中生活中，一定會(huì)有一位老師給你留下了深刻印象。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“Thank you, my teacher”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，讓更多的人認(rèn)識(shí)你的老師，同時(shí)表達(dá)你對(duì)他/她的感激之情。主要內(nèi)容包括: 哪位老師給你留下了深刻印象，發(fā)生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想對(duì)他/她說(shuō)些什么。提示詞語(yǔ)：kind, helpful，talk with，make progress提示問(wèn)題：Which teacher impressed you most?What happened to make you impressed?What do you want to say to him/her?Thank you,my teacher____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】題目一：Dear John, I39。m sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I39。m going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.Your loring student Li Hua題目二：Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful.last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.I really want to sayThank you for helping me. I love you! to my English teacher.【解析】【詳解】、題目①本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，作文要求寫(xiě)一張請(qǐng)假條，因此格式要遵循假條的格式。假條的內(nèi)容——時(shí)間和事由均給出，結(jié)合提示問(wèn)題可知假條主要從三個(gè)方面寫(xiě)，這三個(gè)方面需要作者自由發(fā)揮一部分內(nèi)容。本例文是一篇應(yīng)用文，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)是以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主。例文分成三段，根據(jù)提示問(wèn)題，每段成一行，這種寫(xiě)法條理清晰，分段明確。高分亮點(diǎn)：ask for；absence from；一般將來(lái)時(shí)；in order to；help sb with sth；promise to do；on time。題目②題目二是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)話題可知這是一篇感謝老師的文章。人稱(chēng)應(yīng)該為第一人稱(chēng)。注意給出的提示問(wèn)題，文章要包含這三部分的內(nèi)容。本例文以第一人稱(chēng)書(shū)寫(xiě)，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。文章第一段介紹“我”要感謝的老師，第二段用一般過(guò)去時(shí)介紹為什么“我”要感謝老師，第三段表達(dá) “我”的感謝。分段明確，語(yǔ)句簡(jiǎn)潔不啰嗦，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用合理。高分亮點(diǎn)：Among all my teachers；did badly in；As soon as；found out；talked with；現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)；want to do sth。10．（江蘇中考模擬） 世界衛(wèi)生組織的一項(xiàng)研究報(bào)告顯示，我國(guó)青少年近視率居世界第一。年全國(guó)兩會(huì)當(dāng)中“小眼鏡”成關(guān)注重點(diǎn)，防控青少年近視迫在眉睫。以下表格是學(xué)校針對(duì)本校學(xué)生近視問(wèn)題做的調(diào)查表，假如你是校報(bào)編輯Jack，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的信息，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇調(diào)查報(bào)告，陳述學(xué)校調(diào)查結(jié)果，并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由。我校學(xué)生的近視問(wèn)題調(diào)查情況60%的本校學(xué)生戴眼鏡。原因1. 不良的看書(shū)習(xí)慣，如在床上或陽(yáng)光下看書(shū)……2. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間玩手機(jī)、看電視、玩電腦……3. 學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，作業(yè)多……建議1. 認(rèn)真做眼保健操2. 多吃胡蘿卜等對(duì)眼睛有益的食物3. ……參考詞匯： 近視 nearsighted 注意： 1. 內(nèi)容須包括所提示的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；3. 詞數(shù)：80100，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in 【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don39。t keep your eyes work for a long time. Don39。t spen