【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 當(dāng)孩子們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己受到監(jiān)視時(shí)，他們將來怎么能向我們吐露心聲呢？句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句?！靖叻志湫投縄t will also affect the future selfconfidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild relationship. 這也會(huì)影響未來的自信心建設(shè)，也會(huì)導(dǎo)致更多的擔(dān)憂兒童，形成影響親子關(guān)系的惡性循環(huán)。which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parentchild 。8．（四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬） Writing. Thirtyyear old Sophie has been bullied（欺凌）at school for over two years. She had her bag, keys and mobile phones stolen. Have you ever got in campus bully? Please write a passage with 80120 words about your own opinions. Your passage should include the following points:1. Some mon forms of bullying you’ve seen or experienced. （At least two examples）2. Some effects（影響） on the students who have been bullied at school. （At least two effects）3. Some solutions you consider to solve the problem. （At least three solutions）【答案】Bullying, as far as I know, isprevalentin secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. I saw John had his money stolen .Sometimes he was made to do the cleaning for others. John often feels afraid and can’t concentrate on his study. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide. First, because students spend most of their time in school and it39。s the school39。s responsibility to protect them andstopany forms of bullying. Schools should make rules for , as we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. So they are responsible for their children.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹學(xué)校的欺凌事件?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I saw……，Sometimes he was made to……，John often feels……，because students spend……，Schools should……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我經(jīng)歷過的欺凌事件的形式，接下來介紹學(xué)校欺凌事件對(duì)學(xué)生的影響，最后介紹解決欺凌事件的方法。此處as far as I know, more or less, concentrate on, draw public attention, be responsible for 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。9．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)近日，你校迎來一批來自英國的交流生，學(xué)校組織學(xué)生向他們介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格信息寫一篇題為Chinese Tea的英語短文，向英國交流生介紹中國的茶文化。歷史歷史悠久，享譽(yù)世界。種類種類多樣，各具特色。習(xí)俗以茶會(huì)友，饋贈(zèng)親朋。功效有益健康，提神醒腦。影響……（自擬兩點(diǎn)）。注意:，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Chinese TeaTea is an important part of Chinese culture. 【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. There’re many kinds of tea in China. Each of them has its own characteristics. Most Chinese like drinking often treat friends with often buy tea for their friends and relatives as a tea is good for people’s cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but also builds a bridge between the East and the West.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，題目是Chinese Tea。本文人稱主要是第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，確定主題，表格信息提示就是本文的提綱要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右。要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：茶是中國文化的重要組成部分。它歷史悠久，享譽(yù)世界。中國有很多種茶。它們中的每一個(gè)都有自己的特點(diǎn)。大多數(shù)中國人喜歡喝茶。人們經(jīng)常用茶來招待朋友。他們經(jīng)常給朋友和親戚買茶作為禮物。喝茶有益于人們的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。茶不僅有助于外國人了解中國，而且能在東西方之間架起一座橋梁?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？忌荒苓z漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語言要規(guī)范，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用要正確，敘述清楚條里，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。注意檢查：單詞拼寫、語法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法：：文體，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱。：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。，合理使用連詞。：拼寫是否錯(cuò)誤，語法時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)?。：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。10．（合肥市第四十二中學(xué)中考模擬）每個(gè)人的生命只有一次。請(qǐng)你以“How to Protect Our Lives”為題，從安全和健康的角度入手，寫一篇如何珍惜和保護(hù)我們生命的短文，要點(diǎn)如下：1. 交通安全，校園安全2. 健康的飲食和生活3. ... ...參考詞匯：treasure（v.）珍惜注意：1. 詞數(shù)80~100；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱?！敬鸢浮縃ow to Protect Our LivesIt is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our lives.First of all, we should obey the traffic rules and pay attention to traffic safety.Secondly, we should not chase and fight in school. Don39。t climb trees, don39。t play dangerous games.Thirdly, we should eat some healthy foods, such as vegetables, fruits, and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body.Finally, a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better life.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，first of all，obey the traffic rules，pay attention to，such as，and so on，be able to，learn to do等。而固定句型It is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容；同時(shí)First of all,/ Secondly,/ Thirdly,和Finally,等詞使表達(dá)條理，層次清晰，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是在蘇州學(xué)習(xí)的英國交流學(xué)生Max，你的英國同學(xué)Simon給你寫了一封電子郵件，想了解你在蘇州的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件內(nèi)容，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的實(shí)際情況用英語給Simon回復(fù)一封電子郵件。To: maxbritain@From: simonbritain@Subject: Life in SuzhouDear Max,How are you? I haven39。t heard from you since you arrived in Suzhou. I39。m interested in your life in Suzhou. Would you please tell me the following information?Is everything OK with the school you study in?What are your English classes like?Is there anything interesting in Suzhou?Do you enjoy your life in Suzhou? Why or why not?Looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishesYours,Simon注意：?；貜?fù)郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫、通順。、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Simon,Thanks for your . I39。m sorry I haven