【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 、通順、純正。用的短語(yǔ)、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、來(lái)增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，注意過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語(yǔ)，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。8．（丹江口市習(xí)家店中學(xué)中考模擬）初級(jí)寫(xiě)作今天環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越糟糕，環(huán)境問(wèn)題影響著人們的工作、學(xué)習(xí)、生活等，而我們的工作、生活、生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重……如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境呢？請(qǐng)以“How to protect / save our environment / world?”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示：存在問(wèn)題：；；； .要求：如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境？至少34個(gè)方面，80100詞?！敬鸢浮縏he environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down，some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People39。s health has been greatly affected by air，noise and water pollution． Many people died of diseases．In order to live a better life，it39。s time for us to protect our world． Firstly，we shouldn39。t throw away rubbish everywhere．And we should recycle，reduce and reuse things，for this saves money and reduces pollution．Use things for as long as possible．Don39。t use plastic bags．Also，we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful．【解析】【詳解】寫(xiě)作思路：先仔細(xì)審題，這是寫(xiě)好文章的前提．按照要求把所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容一一呈現(xiàn)出來(lái)，一定要確定好文章的重點(diǎn)，做到主次分明．短文可用一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加文章的色彩．本篇文章首先以The environmental pollution is more and more serious ，指出環(huán)境問(wèn)題變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重，然后按照題目要求逐一列出現(xiàn)在所存在的問(wèn)題。提出問(wèn)題之后接著提出解決問(wèn)題的辦法，其中用到firstly,….Also…等使文章清晰明了，最后提出自己的期望We hope our world is more and more beautiful．文章做到內(nèi)容完整，思路清晰，詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用正確，是一篇很不錯(cuò)的文章。9．（天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)校園安全問(wèn)題越來(lái)越受到重視，為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“School safety”為題寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。提示：1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長(zhǎng)和老師。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話(huà)題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。所提供的材料中列舉了為了確保學(xué)生的安全，學(xué)校制訂了一些規(guī)章制度。主要從1. 遵守校規(guī)，按時(shí)到校、離校；2. 不接受陌生人的物品；3. 結(jié)伴同行，天黑前到家；4. 遇到麻煩及時(shí)告知家長(zhǎng)和老師。這四個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。本文是提建議，因此用shouldn’t或should來(lái)寫(xiě)。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縎econd, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. 第二，我們不應(yīng)該和陌生人一起去，也不應(yīng)該接受陌生人的東西。本句話(huà)是由and連接的并列句?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對(duì)我們有好處。句子these rules are good for 。10．（天津中考模擬）近日中央電視臺(tái)報(bào)道了一個(gè)十四歲小男孩何思汗的事跡，介紹了他賣(mài)畫(huà)籌款醫(yī)治姑姑的感人故事。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文。（1）何思汗從小和姑姑生活在一起，他自幼對(duì)繪畫(huà)有很大興趣。（2）年姑姑患上重病，何思汗的家境日漸貧寒。（3）他作畫(huà)籌款給姑姑治病。（4）思汗勇于面對(duì)困難、主動(dòng)承擔(dān)家務(wù)且刻苦學(xué)習(xí)。（5）你的想法……參考詞匯：嚴(yán)重的serious 疾病disease要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80?100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The Moving Story of He SihanRecently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14yearold boy is a student in Grade 9. He________________【答案】Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14yearold boy is a student in Grade 9. He has lived with his aunt since he was only one year old. When he was a little boy, he showed great interest in painting. At that time, they led a happy life. Unfortunately, his aunt got a serious disease in . Their family became poorer and poorer after that. So he decided to do something for his aunt. By selling the pictures he painted, he raised money for his aunt to treat her disease. You can’t imagine what difficulties he faces, he never gives up. In addition, he offers to do all the housework. What’s more, though he is busy, he studies hard and gets good grades.I feel proud of him. Because he never gives up and tries his best to pay back his aunt, no matter how hard the life is.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，介紹何思汗的感人事跡。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如show great interest in, at that time, unfortunately, 比較級(jí)and比較級(jí), raise money, give up, in addition, offer to do, what’s more, get good grades, feel proud of, pay back以及try one’s best等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。【點(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話(huà)題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。11．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)假如你是在蘇州學(xué)習(xí)的英國(guó)交流學(xué)生Max，你的英國(guó)同學(xué)Simon給你寫(xiě)了一封電子郵件，想了解你在蘇州的學(xué)習(xí)和生活情況。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件內(nèi)容，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的實(shí)際情況用英語(yǔ)給Simon回復(fù)一封電子郵件。To: maxbritain@From: simonbritain@Subject: Life in SuzhouDear Max,How are you? I haven39。t heard from you since you arrived in Suzhou. I39。m interested in your life in Suzhou. Would you please tell me the following information?Is everything OK with the school you study in?What are your English classes like?Is there anything interesting in Suzhou?Do you enjoy your life in Suzhou? Why or why not?Looking forward to hearing from you.Best wishesYours,Simo