【正文】 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. And it has changed a lot. In the past, lots of rubbish could be seen around us. Thanks to the campaign, the streets look much cleaner now. What’s more, there used to be many people breaking the traffic rules. But now we can find more policemen in the streets who warn people to obey traffic rules and the traffic is no longer in a mess. As students we are supposed to follow the traffic rules strictly. Besides we can serve as volunteers to help clean the city. With everybody behaving well, our city will surely bee a civilized city. 【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于創(chuàng)建文明城市活動(dòng)，要求談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。?dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。16．（全國(guó)中考模擬）每位同學(xué)都希望成為班級(jí)中受歡迎的人。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息,寫一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語短文,談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫龅?。?duì)待集體積極參加各項(xiàng)活動(dòng), 注重細(xì)節(jié),工作高標(biāo)準(zhǔn),……對(duì)待他人尊重老師、與同學(xué)相處融洽, 為別人保守秘密, ……對(duì)待自己嚴(yán)于律已，努力學(xué)習(xí)，不輕易放棄，謙虛有禮……要求：1．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Being a Popular StudentWe all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【答案】We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. I think I can take an active part in all kinds of activities. It’s necessary to pay attention to every detail, because a miss is as good as a mile. I’m so well organized that I always work to high standard. I think I should respect our teachers, it’s also important to get along well with my classmates. What’s more, I always help others when they are in trouble. I not only （would） keep secrets for others but also never say bad words about others.I’m always strict with myself in everything. I always try my best to study, I never give up easily. I’m modest and easy to work with. I often help my classmates who has trouble in studying. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【解析】 這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。be popular with sb受某人歡迎；take an active part in積極參加；keep secrets保守秘密； give up easily. 輕易放棄；17．（山西中考模擬）書面表達(dá)年5月18－19日，習(xí)近平總書記在全國(guó)生態(tài)環(huán)境保護(hù)大會(huì)中，指出要加快構(gòu)建生態(tài)文明體系，要全面推動(dòng)綠色發(fā)展。作為一名鄂州籍的中學(xué)生，你的家鄉(xiāng)的環(huán)境怎么樣？發(fā)生了什么樣的變化？要推動(dòng)鄂州的綠色發(fā)展，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該做些什么？請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上三個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫一篇80—100詞的作文，作文中不要出現(xiàn)自己的學(xué)校和個(gè)人姓名?！敬鸢浮緼s we all know, China has been developing extremely fast in different aspects of our life. There are also many places being more and more morden in Ezhou. Our hometown is one of those places which have changed a lot. The followings are the changes that I can show all of you .First of all, The roads in our hometown have been broadened and they are more safer than ever before,which I think is the one of the most meaningful things for our local people. What39。s more ,more and more new buldings have been building to be used for trading with but not the least,people in our hometown are more helpful .They are all willing to help with each other and try their best to make the world more fortble to live in.What I think the most great change is the attitude that we hold .As long as all of us have a right attitude to our life ,our society will be more beautiful and great.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如as we all know，in different aspects of our life，more and more morden，a lot，all of you，first of all，in our hometown，one of the most meaningful things，what39。s more，help with each other，live in，as long as等。而First of all, The roads in our hometown have been broadened and they are more safer than ever before, which I think is the one of the most meaningful things for our local people./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / As long as all of us have a right attitude to our life ,our society will be more beautiful and ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。18．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們，三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了，在我們的成長(zhǎng)過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學(xué)?；蚣依镌?jīng)遇到的最大問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數(shù)80～100，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teac