【正文】 e’s opinion, try one’ s best等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（全國(guó)中考模擬）假如你叫李平，是一位成績(jī)優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生。你班班主任在安排座位時(shí)，讓成績(jī)好的學(xué)生和成績(jī)差的學(xué)生同桌，這在學(xué)生中引起了反響，班會(huì)課上大家就此進(jìn)行了討論?，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表把討論結(jié)果向班主任寫一封信反映一下，并說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。70%的學(xué)生贊成1. 學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)不好，但擅長(zhǎng)體育、藝術(shù)；2. 相互學(xué)習(xí)，發(fā)展友誼；30%的學(xué)生反對(duì)1. 部分學(xué)習(xí)差的學(xué)生常常上課講話而不認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講；2. 經(jīng)常問(wèn)問(wèn)題，影響別人。你的觀點(diǎn)……（至少發(fā)揮兩句）注意：1. 詞數(shù)：90字左右，短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文需包括表中所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；3. 參考詞匯：成績(jī)差的學(xué)生 a slower student Dear Mr. Zhang.We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. Yours，Li Ping【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.70 percent of the students agree with you. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in sports or arts. So they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship.However, 30 percent of the students don’t agree. They think some slower students always talk in class instead of listening to the teachers carefully. On the other hand, slower students often ask questions and they may influence others.I think I’d like to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other. We can make progress together. YoursLi Ping【解析】 這是一篇圖表，你班班主任在安排座位時(shí)，讓成績(jī)好的學(xué)生和成績(jī)差的學(xué)生同桌，這在學(xué)生中引起了反響，班會(huì)課上大家就此進(jìn)行了討論?，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格把討論結(jié)果向班主任寫一封信反映一下，并說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。agree with sb同意某人；be good at擅長(zhǎng)； learn from each other互相學(xué)習(xí)16．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達(dá)（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。學(xué)校英語(yǔ)?？队⒄Z(yǔ)天地》對(duì)此進(jìn)行調(diào)查，假如你是一名?？∮浾?，請(qǐng)你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%） popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)這件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個(gè)表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對(duì)這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由，只給了一些短語(yǔ)，我們需要組織語(yǔ)言，將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對(duì)者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來(lái)敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級(jí)句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對(duì)玩這個(gè)游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語(yǔ)言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語(yǔ)法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)在英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開(kāi)了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕āF(tuán)隊(duì)旅游◆有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路；◆不必自己找食宿◆結(jié)識(shí)朋友，互相幫助個(gè)人旅游◆自由安排時(shí)間；◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點(diǎn)；◆學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己你的想法……注意事項(xiàng)：1．文章必須包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2．想法至少在兩句以上；3．詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游travel with a group 個(gè)人旅游travel aloneRecently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．__________________________________________________________________________________