【正文】 in our celebration of Environment Protection Day.The celebration will be held in the Olympic Park at 2 pm on June 5.Our main activities will be planting trees and learning how to recycle. First，each student willbe given the chance to plant one tree. Planting trees helps keep the air clean and will also make ourcity more beautiful. Please prepare to get your hands dirty and dress accordingly. Our second activitywill be all about recycling. Our teacher，Mr. Parker will give us a speech about how to recycle andreuse in life at 4 pm. This will be a great opportunity to learn how to do it and e with an openmind.Environment Protection Day only es once a year，so I really hope you can attend ouractivities.Looking forward to seeing you there.Yours，Li Hua【解析】 假 如 你 是 李 華 ，為 慶 祝 6月 5日 世 界 環(huán) 境 日 ，你 們 學(xué) 校 組 織 主 題 為 “我 們 的 地 球 我 們 的 家園 （ One Earth One Family）”的 志 愿 者 活 動(dòng) ?請(qǐng) 你 寫 一 封 電 子 郵 件 給 外 教 Peter，邀 請(qǐng) 他 來(lái) 參 加活 動(dòng) ?主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :活 動(dòng) 的 時(shí) 間 和 地 點(diǎn) ，你 們 準(zhǔn) 備 做 些 什 么 ，以 及 你 們 做 這 些 事 情 的 原 因 ?動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。 take part in參加； keep the air clean 保持空氣干凈15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假定你叫John，最近從報(bào)紙上得知英國(guó)某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請(qǐng)給該公司寫封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息。適當(dāng)提出一點(diǎn)你的建議。注意：1．詞數(shù)80—100；2．請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；3．郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir or Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully, John【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?I39。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。內(nèi)容是針對(duì)英國(guó)某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠這件事，寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)歡迎和你的擔(dān)憂。注意電子郵件的格式，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱?？忌枰紫葘徢逯黝}，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱要點(diǎn)，不要遺漏。行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句。作文完成后，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏需要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)。本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：1．表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；2．感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；3．希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息；最后，適當(dāng)提出一點(diǎn)你的建議。16．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達(dá)（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。學(xué)校英語(yǔ)?？队⒄Z(yǔ)天地》對(duì)此進(jìn)行調(diào)查，假如你是一名校刊小記者，請(qǐng)你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%） popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請(qǐng)勿提及你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和其他真實(shí)信息。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)這件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個(gè)表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對(duì)這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由，只給了一些短語(yǔ)，我們需要組織語(yǔ)言，將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對(duì)者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來(lái)敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級(jí)句型和較復(fù)雜的句式。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對(duì)玩這個(gè)游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語(yǔ)言得體，句式準(zhǔn)確，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語(yǔ)法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革，經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng)，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The