【正文】 哪些詞匯、短語和句型，每個句子應以簡單句為基礎，如主謂賓結構或主系表結構，然后再變化成較高級、復雜是句型，如復合句、非謂語動詞形式等。另外還應注意語句之間的連接，使用恰當的連詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整、充實。作者根據題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內容非常真實。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現在時態(tài)來敘述，符合題目要求。語法規(guī)范，句式表達符合英語的習慣。文章中以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復合句，調整文章結構，使用復雜句型、短文和較高級的句型，提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。15．（上海中考模擬）In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“ ..and I”.（以“我和……” 為題，寫一篇60120 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。） 每一個生命個體都和這個世界發(fā)生著聯系，你也不例外。請分享一個你和他人、社會或自然 之間的故事，并談談自己的體驗或感受。（注意：短文中不得出現考生真實的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。）【答案】My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會或自然 之間的故事，并談談自己的體驗或感受。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。16．（北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，即將結束在美國的交換學習，回國前你想給住家媽媽Sarah寫封感謝信，告訴她你什么時候回國，為什么感謝她，以及你的感受。提示詞語： help, care, municate, drive to hospital, own family提示要點：When are you going to leave?Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?How do you feel?Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well. Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”Thanks again for taking care of me so well.【解析】此文為提綱式作文，文章屬于感謝信。文章可分為三段，第一段表明寫信的目的；第二段分析感謝的具體原因；第三段寫出你在住家媽媽Sarah家里的感受。文章用第一人稱來寫，時態(tài)主要用一般過去時和一般將來時。亮點分析：表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.[高分句型一]I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English. 我永遠不會忘記，當我用英語和別人交流困難時，你主動提出幫助我。句子中有when引導的時間狀語從句。[高分句型二]Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您們家里就像住在我自己的家里一樣，這讓我想起了一句話：“天下之大, 家最美好?！?其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引導的定語從句。17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達初中生即將結束，學校英語俱樂部特邀你寫一篇英語短文，給七年級新生的學習生活提幾點建議。 內容要點如下：，好的學習方法很重要；，保持健康；，使學校生活豐富；，多交朋友；。注意:，不計入總詞數。，詞數80詞左右。參考詞匯：method club. n 社團 colorful Wele to our school! 【答案】Wele to our school!I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。要求是給七年級新生的學習生活提幾點建議，所以人稱主要用第二人稱，時態(tài)用一般現在時。在寫作過程中，首先要將所提供給的信息要點用英語正確的表達出來，要涵蓋所提到的所有要點，同時注意理順要點，防止漏寫，可適當發(fā)揮。同時在寫作的時候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。要注意準確運用時態(tài)，語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后檢查所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達是否準確，語法、拼寫、標點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。18．（河南中考模擬）書面表達近幾年來，越來越多的中國人出國旅游，但一些游客的不文明行為也成為國內外輿論關注的焦點。直接影響著中國“禮儀之邦”之形象。新華旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客應認真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”， 請以How to be a qualified tourist 為題目 寫一則英語短文，談談自己的看法。1 、保護環(huán)境，不隨地吐痰，不亂扔垃圾。 2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公眾場所喧嘩，購物時排隊。 3 、保護文物古跡，不到處亂涂亂刻，不攀爬觸摸文物。4 、節(jié)約用水用電，用餐不浪費。注意：1. 文章必須包括提示內容，可以適當擴展，增加細節(jié)使行文連貫； 2. 詞數80左右； 3. 開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數； 4. 參考詞匯：文物古跡cultural relics 文物artifactsHow to be a Qualified Tourist_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________