【正文】 哪些詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，每個(gè)句子應(yīng)以簡(jiǎn)單句為基礎(chǔ)，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，然后再變化成較高級(jí)、復(fù)雜是句型，如復(fù)合句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式等。另外還應(yīng)注意語(yǔ)句之間的連接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級(jí)發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實(shí)。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)敘述，符合題目要求。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣。文章中以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用復(fù)雜句型、短文和較高級(jí)的句型，提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語(yǔ)有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。15．（上海中考模擬）In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“ ..and I”.（以“我和……” 為題，寫一篇60120 個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。） 每一個(gè)生命個(gè)體都和這個(gè)世界發(fā)生著聯(lián)系，你也不例外。請(qǐng)分享一個(gè)你和他人、社會(huì)或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）【答案】My friends and IBefore I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.【解析】 這是一篇要求介紹自己和他人、社會(huì)或自然 之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。16．（北京中考模擬）假如你是李華，即將結(jié)束在美國(guó)的交換學(xué)習(xí)，回國(guó)前你想給住家媽媽Sarah寫封感謝信，告訴她你什么時(shí)候回國(guó)，為什么感謝她，以及你的感受。提示詞語(yǔ)： help, care, municate, drive to hospital, own family提示要點(diǎn)：When are you going to leave?Why do you want to say ‘thank you’ to her?How do you feel?Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sarah,I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. I am going to leave the US next Tuesday morning. I really want to say thanks to you because of your help and care during my stay here. I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English, and I will never forget you drove me to the hospital in the late night when I didn’t feel well. Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.”Thanks again for taking care of me so well.【解析】此文為提綱式作文，文章屬于感謝信。文章可分為三段，第一段表明寫信的目的；第二段分析感謝的具體原因；第三段寫出你在住家媽媽Sarah家里的感受。文章用第一人稱來(lái)寫，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。亮點(diǎn)分析：表示感激的句型：I’m writing to deliver my thanks to you. Thanks again for taking care of me so well.[高分句型一]I will never forget you offered to help when I had difficulty in municating with others in English. 我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記，當(dāng)我用英語(yǔ)和別人交流困難時(shí)，你主動(dòng)提出幫助我。句子中有when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。[高分句型二]Staying with your family is just like being with my own family, which reminds me of the saying, “East or west, home is best.” 住在您們家里就像住在我自己的家里一樣，這讓我想起了一句話：“天下之大, 家最美好?！?其中which reminds me of the saying是由which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)初中生即將結(jié)束，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部特邀你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議。 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：，好的學(xué)習(xí)方法很重要；，保持健康；，使學(xué)校生活豐富；，多交朋友；。注意:，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。，詞數(shù)80詞左右。參考詞匯：method club. n 社團(tuán) colorful Wele to our school! 【答案】Wele to our school!I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。要求是給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議，所以人稱主要用第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。在寫作過(guò)程中，首先要將所提供給的信息要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)正確的表達(dá)出來(lái)，要涵蓋所提到的所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)注意理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。同時(shí)在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后檢查所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。18．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)近幾年來(lái)，越來(lái)越多的中國(guó)人出國(guó)旅游，但一些游客的不文明行為也成為國(guó)內(nèi)外輿論關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。直接影響著中國(guó)“禮儀之邦”之形象。新華旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”， 請(qǐng)以How to be a qualified tourist 為題目 寫一則英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā? 、保護(hù)環(huán)境，不隨地吐痰，不亂扔垃圾。 2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公眾場(chǎng)所喧嘩，購(gòu)物時(shí)排隊(duì)。 3 、保護(hù)文物古跡，不到處亂涂亂刻，不攀爬觸摸文物。4 、節(jié)約用水用電，用餐不浪費(fèi)。注意：1. 文章必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫； 2. 詞數(shù)80左右； 3. 開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 4. 參考詞匯：文物古跡cultural relics 文物artifactsHow to be a Qualified Tourist_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________