【正文】 加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。12．（江蘇省運(yùn)河中學(xué)中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。根據(jù)下列圖畫，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示詞：bucket n. 水桶，tap n. 水龍頭___________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A little boy saw an old woman carrying a bucket to fetch water. He rushed forward to help Grandma fetch water, but he was so short that he could not reach the tap. At this time, a big sister saw that he helped him turn on the water pipe and fill the water. The little boy took the water to Grandma. Grandma was very grateful to the little boy. We should also learn from that little boy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如At this time, a big sister saw that he helped him turn on the water pipe and fill the water給文章增色不少。13．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)幸福是什么呢?是父母細(xì)心的呵護(hù)，是成功時(shí)朋友的祝福，是幫助他人后會(huì)心的一笑，還是……？其實(shí)幸福很簡單，幸福就在你身邊。請(qǐng)你以“Happiness”為題，寫一篇英語短文，讓我們分享你的感受。詞數(shù)：不少于80。溫馨提示：l、短文中請(qǐng)勿使用真實(shí)姓名、地點(diǎn)或所在學(xué)校名稱。這些詞匯也許對(duì)你有幫助：treasure（v. 珍惜），fort （v．安慰），share （v．分享）Happiness________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HappinessDad has been away from our city since he found a job in Guangzhou years ago. He seldom es back home except Spring Festivals. I stay with Mom and Grandma in the countryside. They care for me a lot. When I meet something difficult, I prefer to talk with Dad on the phone. Grandma also enjoys our chatting online. No matter where Dad is, my family is always full of happiness. How I wish next S pring Festival would e soon so that the whole family can get together!【解析】話題作文寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句。14．（山東中考模擬）初中生活即將結(jié)束，學(xué)校英語俱樂部特邀你寫一篇英語短文,給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1. 初中科目更多，好的學(xué)習(xí)方法很重要；2. 鍛煉身體，保持健康；3. 參加社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，使學(xué)校生活豐富；4. 多讀書，多交朋友；5. 補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)個(gè)人想法。注意：1. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 詞數(shù)：60－80；3. 內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；4. 短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：method n. 方法　club n．社團(tuán)　colorful Wele to our school!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，自己即將畢業(yè)，給七年級(jí)新生的學(xué)習(xí)生活提幾點(diǎn)建議。結(jié)合所給的材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，以第一人稱為主，要注意主謂一致，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，用自己熟悉的單詞和句式來寫。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開頭兩句很自然地過渡到正文上來。用了短語和句式，如：graduate from畢業(yè)于；share sth with sb和某人分享某事；wait for等候等，用來一些過渡詞或短語，如：Firstly, Secondly,In other words, At last等，上下文銜接很自然。15．（黑龍江中考模擬）話題作文：根據(jù)漢語提示和要求寫一篇短文。（A和B兩篇，可任選一篇）現(xiàn)在有許多新的購物方式，網(wǎng)上購物就是其中的一種。越來越多的人熟悉和喜歡網(wǎng)購，但是網(wǎng)購有利有弊，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的信息用英語以“Online shopping”為題寫一篇短文，描述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?yōu)點(diǎn)：可以在任何時(shí)候購物；只需要一臺(tái)電腦和鼠標(biāo)；方便比較同類產(chǎn)品的價(jià)格，可以省錢；無論何時(shí)何地都可以收到所購物品。缺點(diǎn)：網(wǎng)上付款有時(shí)不安全；看不到實(shí)物，也不能試穿衣服。注意：語意連貫，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確；詞數(shù)80－100。字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。【答案】Online shoppingThere are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a puter and mouse. Third, you can pare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you’ll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，要表達(dá)網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的利與弊。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如advantage, at any time, the price of, disadvantage, try on, not...any more等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。16．（江蘇中考模擬） 書面表達(dá)共享單車（shared bikes）在蘇州投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時(shí)也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國民素質(zhì)的‘“照妖鏡”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽(yù)。諸多優(yōu)勢，出行方便，減少污染 ，負(fù)擔(dān)得起存在問題 你的觀點(diǎn)我認(rèn)為……（考生自擬，至少2點(diǎn)）注意事項(xiàng)：，要求語句通順，意思連貫?！澳愕挠^點(diǎn)”一欄用2―3句話展開合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have