【正文】 some patients pay no attention to the flu, it starts very suddenly and spreads from person to person closely in ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達流暢，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。15．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的不斷發(fā)展，傳統(tǒng)的學(xué)習(xí)模式受到?jīng)_擊?！熬W(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”這一新的學(xué)習(xí)模式備受青睞。假設(shè)你是陳欣，最近某英文雜志正在討論中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進行在線學(xué)習(xí)。以下是你所在班級的討論情況，請你給該報投稿，反映討論結(jié)果并談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕?。提示：觀點贊成反對理由1. 網(wǎng)上資源（resource）豐富2. 可以自由（freedom）選擇學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容和時間1. 網(wǎng)上信息太多，有些不真實2. 長時間用電腦對眼睛不好要求：詞數(shù)不少于80詞，稿件的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。向子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，要點齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名、地名。Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t wele it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達以“網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”為話題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的兩種不同的觀點。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語從句、讓步狀語從句、動名詞作主語等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。16．（河南中考模擬）書面表達近幾年來，越來越多的中國人出國旅游，但一些游客的不文明行為也成為國內(nèi)外輿論關(guān)注的焦點。直接影響著中國“禮儀之邦”之形象。新華旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客應(yīng)認真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”， 請以How to be a qualified tourist 為題目 寫一則英語短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā? 、保護環(huán)境，不隨地吐痰，不亂扔垃圾。 2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公眾場所喧嘩，購物時排隊。 3 、保護文物古跡，不到處亂涂亂刻，不攀爬觸摸文物。4 、節(jié)約用水用電，用餐不浪費。注意：1. 文章必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)擴展，增加細節(jié)使行文連貫； 2. 詞數(shù)80左右； 3. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)； 4. 參考詞匯：文物古跡cultural relics 文物artifactsHow to be a Qualified Tourist____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, more and more Chinese people travel abroad , but some of them have bad manners .The poor behaviors or some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. How should we be a qualified tourist? In my opinion ,We have to understand and respect foreign cultures. First, we are supposed to protect the environment ,We shouldn’t spit or throw the rubbish everywhere. Second, we should obey the public order .We had better not shout loudly in public places , We have to wait in line when we are shopping .Third, we should protect the cultural relics. We mustn’t paint or carve on the monuments. We shouldn’t climb or touch artifacts. At the same time, we should save water and electricity. We are not supposed to waste food when we have meals . In this way, we39。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.【解析】寫作分析：這篇寫作需要圍繞“如何做一個合格的游客”展開寫作，具體的要點已經(jīng)給出了。寫作的時候可以適當(dāng)借助祈使句來表示“不應(yīng)該做…”，需要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)姆绞揭胛恼?，銜接好每個要點。寫作亮點：開頭應(yīng)該對寫作的背景進行一定的交代?！癰ad manners”表示禮貌狀況不好，然后講到了這些行為對中國的名聲有害（have done great harm to our good reputation），這里用到了現(xiàn)在完成時，表示傷害已經(jīng)造成了，產(chǎn)生了不好的影響，時態(tài)的妙用是一個亮點。緊接著發(fā)問引入主題。借助first, second等詞串聯(lián)起自己的觀點。相關(guān)短語使用恰當(dāng)，“are supposed to”（應(yīng)該…），“spit or throw the rubbish everywhere”（四處亂扔垃圾），“protect the cultural relics”（保護文化遺產(chǎn)），最后文章有簡練的收尾，we39。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.（我們會為我們自己和我們的國家贏得尊重），簡練，完成了寫作任務(wù)。17．（四川中考模擬）（題文）書面表達課外活動可以讓我們增長知識，發(fā)展智力，開闊視野和塑造性格。許多學(xué)校創(chuàng)造性地開展了課外活動，如朗誦、唱歌、講故事、演話劇、辦刊物以及舉辦各種體育活動等。最近，某中學(xué)生英文報開設(shè)了“Afterclass Activities”的欄目。請你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動。；；。注意： 80 以上；、校名及地名；（不計入總詞數(shù)）。Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activities are being more and more popular in junior schools.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activ