【正文】 ochild policy is the gift for some only some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely.If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, twochild policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如first of all，grow up，grow older，marry with，burden on，have to do， take care of，by oneself，have no playmate，the number of等。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)Relationship and Emotional Attitude （人際關(guān)系和情感態(tài)度）現(xiàn)在社會(huì)普遍對(duì)90后，00后有一些誤解， 認(rèn)為他們自私、無禮，所以不能很好地與 人溝通，那么，作為一名00后學(xué)生，你又是怎么看待這個(gè)問題的呢? 請(qǐng)結(jié)合你自己和周圍同學(xué)的表現(xiàn)，分別列舉至少三條優(yōu)點(diǎn)和兩條不足之處進(jìn)行描述。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t municate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；municate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。17．（江蘇中考模擬）某英語報(bào)開展“How to deal with the exam stress?”征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的提示內(nèi)容，簡(jiǎn)要描述并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語短文。適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?. 積極思考，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)2. 及時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)，防止遺忘過重的壓力1. 無法入睡，非常疲憊2. 害怕考試，導(dǎo)致失敗應(yīng)對(duì)的措施1. 合理計(jì)劃，準(zhǔn)備充分2. ……注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右，短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2. 表格最后一欄中省略部分須用12句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。How to deal with the exam stressEveryone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How to Deal with the Exam StressEveryone may have the exam stress．A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us．If we have proper stress，we can think actively and work harder．Besides it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them．So we can pass the exams easily．However，if we have too heavy stress，we can39。t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired．We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end．In my opinion，to deal with stress，we39。d better plan and prepare well．We should also form some good habits，such as enough exercise and healthy diets．Then we39。ll feel relaxed and do well in the exams． 【解析】試題分析：本書面表達(dá)以“How to deal with the exam stress”為題寫一篇作文。在題目中給出了一張表格，需要用正確的英語將表格中的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。分析表格可以看到，這篇作文的內(nèi)容主要有三個(gè)方面，第一個(gè)是適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?duì)我們是有好處的；第二個(gè)是過多的壓力對(duì)我們有害；最后發(fā)表自己的看法，如何來應(yīng)對(duì)壓力。因此這篇作文可以分為三段來寫，這樣可以使整個(gè)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)有層次。在每一段中加上具體的內(nèi)容，使段落更加充實(shí)。最后還要補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)自己的觀點(diǎn)。全文需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱來寫。注意多使用一些好的句式、短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。作者按照題目要求把表格中的內(nèi)容完整的表達(dá)出來，并加上了自己的看法。作者將整篇短文分成了三個(gè)部分，首先寫的是適當(dāng)?shù)膲毫?duì)我們有利。這里作者主要使用的句型或短語有besides，還用到了一些復(fù)合句，如條件狀語從句等；接下來作者寫的是過多的壓力的害處，段首先用however來進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)折，然后使用了一個(gè)復(fù)合句ifwehavetooheavystress,wecan’tsleepwellatnightandwemayfeel too，但是意思很完整；最后作者發(fā)表了自己的觀點(diǎn)，用了短語inmyopinion，還用到了提建議時(shí)經(jīng)常用的hadbetter和should。整篇作文意思連貫，語言流暢，層次分明。18．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá) 初三的學(xué)習(xí)生活繁忙中有困惑、淚水，也有進(jìn)步、喜悅。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提示，寫一篇題為“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介紹九年級(jí)的學(xué)校生活，并提出希望和建議。在校老師工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)，充滿愛心學(xué)生…… （至少發(fā)揮兩點(diǎn)）周末作業(yè)作業(yè)多．舍棄愛好其它活動(dòng)鍛煉，電視愿望…… （發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)）要求：1．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：2．文章不少于90詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．語意通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；4．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our