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文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和個(gè)人的相關(guān)信息。MyMotherWeneedlove.Wealsoneedtoshowlove.ThepersonIlovemostismymother.___.【答案】My motherWe need love.We also need toshow love.The person I love most is my mother.My mother is 41 years old.She is of medium build with long black hair.She is quiet.She is a history teacher in a middle school.She likes dancing.She can cook delicious food.She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for my study,even though she didn39。t have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I39。ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young.I39。ll take her to wonderful sights around China.Most importantly,I will stay with her when I have free time.That39。s what she wants most,I think.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。為感受母愛(ài)情深,弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào),要求以MyMother為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹你的母親和你之間的故事,參加某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站正在舉辦的征文活動(dòng)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài);注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩?!军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作,在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)句要通順,詞匯書(shū)寫(xiě)無(wú)誤,不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。10.近期某英文報(bào)紙就“Snowplow Parents(掃雪機(jī)式父母)”這一話題展開(kāi)討論?!皰哐C(jī)式父母”的特征是不惜一切代價(jià)為孩子掃除他們生活中遇到的一切障礙,解決一切困難,以便他們可以輕松擁有成功的人生。請(qǐng)從下表的兩種觀點(diǎn)中選擇一種觀點(diǎn),并結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法,用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。觀點(diǎn)理解不理解父母出于對(duì)孩子的愛(ài)才這么做。父母控制一切,孩子沒(méi)有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求:詞數(shù):6080詞。短文應(yīng)包括所選觀點(diǎn)中的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。t understand the snowplow these parents,they control clean all the obstacles in children39。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。t do all the things for they also need the experiences in their these experiences play an important role in a successful this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in ,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】:本文是一篇話題作文,要求就“Snowplow Parents(掃雪機(jī)式父母)” 這一話題展開(kāi)討論,并根據(jù)表格中所給出的提示內(nèi)容選擇一種觀點(diǎn),結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法。在解答寫(xiě)作這類試題時(shí),要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾,將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下,形成提綱,然后再動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。: 本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第三人稱,輔以第一人稱。文章首先說(shuō)明不理解掃雪機(jī)式父母的原因,接下來(lái)說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn),并闡述自己觀點(diǎn)的原因。:短語(yǔ):in one39。s lives,in this case,in this way,in trouble。句型:高分句型一:Inthiscase,theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasily.Inthiscase在這樣的情況下;這句話意為:在這樣的情況下,他們認(rèn)為孩子會(huì)更加輕松擁有成功的人生。高分句型二:they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻煩,這句話意為:當(dāng)他們陷入麻煩時(shí)他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問(wèn)題。