【正文】 都不很明確。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當拓展，使文章內容充實。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進行寫作，在文章結尾也按照標準書信格式進行了收尾。文章時態(tài)用一般現在時和一般將來時。文章條理分明，三個要點提示都已表達清楚，并進行了適當拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。句型：被動句型，現在分詞作狀語，主語從句。9．為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一個選題。請你根據下面的內容提示, 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。內容提示：1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。要求：1. 可以適當增加細節(jié), 以使行文連貫：詞數：100左右. 2. 不得在作文中出現學校的真實名稱、老師和同學的真實姓名?！敬鸢浮縇ong long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經典故事, “程門立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運用動詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個故事，發(fā)表看法或者觀點。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，具有條理性。10．近期某英文報紙就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機式父母）”這一話題展開討論。“掃雪機式父母”的特征是不惜一切代價為孩子掃除他們生活中遇到的一切障礙，解決一切困難，以便他們可以輕松擁有成功的人生。請從下表的兩種觀點中選擇一種觀點，并結合此觀點闡述自己的看法，用英文寫一篇短文投稿。觀點理解不理解父母出于對孩子的愛才這么做。父母控制一切，孩子沒有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求：詞數：6080詞。短文應包括所選觀點中的要點，可適當發(fā)揮。短文中不得出現真實的人名、校名等相關信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。t understand the snowplow these parents,they control clean all the obstacles in children39。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。t do all the things for they also need the experiences in their these experiences play an important role in a successful this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in ,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】：本文是一篇話題作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機式父母）” 這一話題展開討論，并根據表格中所給出的提示內容選擇一種觀點，結合此觀點闡述自己的看法。在解答寫作這類試題時，要根據短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結尾，將主要句型、關鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動筆寫作。： 本文時態(tài)為一般現在時，人稱主要為第三人稱，輔以第一人稱。文章首先說明不理解掃雪機式父母的原因，接下來說明自己的觀點，并闡述自己觀點的原因。：短語：in one39。s lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。句型：高分句型一：Inthiscase，theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasily．Inthiscase在這樣的情況下；這句話意為：在這樣的情況下，他們認為孩子會更加輕松擁有成功的人生。高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻煩，這句話意為：當他們陷入麻煩時他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問題。