【正文】 fic safety is everybody39。s business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文, 介紹作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)該怎么做，結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了現(xiàn)在有很多交通問題，接下來介紹我們應(yīng)遵守的交通規(guī)則，最后指出人人認(rèn)為交通安全是自己的事，我們才能在路上安全行駛。此處e into, such as, for example, tell sb not to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（靖江外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文?；厩闆r張陽，陽光中學(xué)九年級二班學(xué)生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀。每周花七個多小時閱讀各種類型的書，因?yàn)椤Ｃ磕杲y(tǒng)計(jì)兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。優(yōu)秀事跡上個月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個人為保護(hù)環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。如：…….（舉1例）要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。16．（四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）Our junior school life is going to be finished very soon. Looking back, we must have our special thanks to someone, or something we feel regretful, or some moments which are unforgettable. Please use “The last moment of junior life “as the title to write an article which should be about 120 words. The following aspects should be mentioned:1. Your general feeling of your junior school life.2. Your special thanks to someone and describe the reasons. （at least two reasons）3. Describe the most unforgettable thing in your junior school in detail. （when, where, who, what happened）4. Show your best wishes to your teachers and classmates for the future.【答案】The last moment of junior lifeJunior school life is going to be finished soon. I feel very excited at this moment because I have made a lot of close friends in the past three years. Now I am ready to embrace the ing exam and the future senior high school life.I want to express my gratitude to my teachers. They taught me large amount of knowledge and they cheered me up several times in the past. They let me bee more confident.I was once a shy girl. I was afraid to speak in public. One day，my mother heard that a speech petition would be held in my school. She encouraged me to take part in the activity. At first, I was shocked by her advice, but I did not want to let her down, so I agreed. During that period，my mother often took me to the park to practice. I still remembered that day clearly. When I won the first prize, my mother smiled happily.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文的題干大意是：我們的初中生活即將結(jié)束。回顧過去，我們一定想特別感謝某人，或者有些我們感到特別遺憾的事情，或者是一些令人難忘的時刻。請以“初中生活的最后一刻”作為寫一篇應(yīng)該約120字的文章。需要包括的要點(diǎn)有：；，至少要寫兩條原因；，要有細(xì)節(jié)，說出時間、地點(diǎn)、人物以及具體發(fā)生的事件。寫作的時候可以分為三個部分，第一段介紹自己的感受，第二段講對某人的感謝及其原因，最后一段寫一個小片段，寫寫自己想感謝的人。這里可以寫感謝自己的母親在初中鼓勵我參加演講比賽。用到的短語可以有：speak in public 在公共場合說話，worried about 擔(dān)心，encouraged me to 鼓勵我去做…，take part in the activity 參加活動，was shocked by 被…震驚，let her down讓她失望，encouragement and pany 鼓勵和陪伴，made such great progress取得如此大的進(jìn)步。17．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)在學(xué)習(xí)中, 不良的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣導(dǎo)致學(xué)習(xí)效率不高。以 How to improve learning efficiency 為題，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容如下：1. 說明是否存在學(xué)習(xí)效率不高的現(xiàn)象；2. 分析自己或他人效率不高的原因，并舉例說明；3. 根據(jù)你所列出的原因，提出相應(yīng)的建議。參考詞匯：效率 efficiency注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2. 語言通順，句子連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3. 詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。How to improve learning efficiencyIn my class, _______________________________________________________________【答案】How to improve learning efficiencyIn my class, some of my classmates have asked me how to study better. They often say, “why aren’t my grades improving even after I study harder?” In my opinion, it has to do with learning efficiency.First, some students spend a lot of time on other things, including puter games and TV programs. Although they always finish their homework on time, they don’t do it carefully. Second, some students stay up late studying. They might only have five hours left for sleeping. Because they’re so sleepy, they can’t pay their full attention in class. How can they improve if they don’t get enough sleep?My suggestion is that students should use their time wisely. If you cannot control yourself, you’d better ask your teachers or parents for help. They can help you make a plan. If you follow the suggestion and take action, I believe your learning efficiency will be greatly improved.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。要求以How to improve learning efficiency 為題，寫一篇英語短文。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。18．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)。為了創(chuàng)建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市團(tuán)委正在開展“學(xué)雷鋒、講文明、樹新風(fēng)”的活動，作為一名中學(xué)生，我們平時應(yīng)該從以下幾個方面來規(guī)范自己的言行舉止。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇短文。倡導(dǎo)低碳騎自行車或步行上學(xué)，注意節(jié)約……保護(hù)環(huán)境愛護(hù)花草，不亂扔垃圾