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【正文】 and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ，理由也很充分。考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。9．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下表用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容須包括：對(duì)下表中關(guān)于（City A和City B）的全部信息進(jìn)行比較，分析利弊，確定其中一個(gè)城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Things to do★★★★★★Food★★★★★★In my opinion, is he better place to spend my summer holiday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less fortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個(gè)城市的飛行時(shí)常、氣溫、旅館情況。食物等相關(guān)信息，要求考生對(duì)每個(gè)信息進(jìn)行比較，選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語(yǔ)寫作的基本功，需要考生對(duì)常用的英語(yǔ)句型熟練掌握。熟悉英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)方式。避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)。句型不要都用簡(jiǎn)單句。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個(gè)信息都進(jìn)行比較，不要有漏掉。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。對(duì)于城市A的缺點(diǎn)，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過(guò)。對(duì)于優(yōu)點(diǎn)則重點(diǎn)突出，因?yàn)樵诔鞘蠥可以做很多事情，作者在這里用了詞組“a lot of ”。在比較的時(shí)候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時(shí)，直接用比較級(jí)“higher”在說(shuō)旅館時(shí)用了“l(fā)ess fortable ”，比較食物時(shí)，用了“as…as”等。在說(shuō)選擇城市A的原因時(shí)，用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。本文大部分都是復(fù)雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語(yǔ)寫作水平。10．近期某英文報(bào)紙就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機(jī)式父母）”這一話題展開討論。“掃雪機(jī)式父母”的特征是不惜一切代價(jià)為孩子掃除他們生活中遇到的一切障礙，解決一切困難，以便他們可以輕松擁有成功的人生。請(qǐng)從下表的兩種觀點(diǎn)中選擇一種觀點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法，用英文寫一篇短文投稿。觀點(diǎn)理解不理解父母出于對(duì)孩子的愛(ài)才這么做。父母控制一切，孩子沒(méi)有自由。自己的看法自己的看法要求：詞數(shù)：6080詞。短文應(yīng)包括所選觀點(diǎn)中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I really can39。t understand the snowplow these parents,they control clean all the obstacles in children39。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。t do all the things for they also need the experiences in their these experiences play an important role in a successful this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in ,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.【解析】【詳解】：本文是一篇話題作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（掃雪機(jī)式父母）” 這一話題展開討論，并根據(jù)表格中所給出的提示內(nèi)容選擇一種觀點(diǎn)，結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法。在解答寫作這類試題時(shí)，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動(dòng)筆寫作。： 本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要為第三人稱，輔以第一人稱。文章首先說(shuō)明不理解掃雪機(jī)式父母的原因，接下來(lái)說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己觀點(diǎn)的原因。：短語(yǔ)：in one39。s lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。句型：高分句型一：Inthiscase，theythinkchildrenhaveasuccessfullifeeasily．Inthiscase在這樣的情況下；這句話意為：在這樣的情況下，他們認(rèn)為孩子會(huì)更加輕松擁有成功的人生。高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.beintrouble陷入麻煩，這句話意為：當(dāng)他們陷入麻煩時(shí)他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問(wèn)題。
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