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e litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins;Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference。【點睛】首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達,例如save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。以及狀語從句等;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結構是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9.4月23日是“世界讀書日”,你校英語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書,讀好書”的活動。假如你是李華,請你寫一封倡議書,向全體同學發(fā)出號召。內容包括:應該讀什么樣的書,以及讀書的意義。提示詞語:story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問題:● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀:該題目屬于應用文寫作,但寫作時要按照應用文格式寫,寫作時承接短文開頭,寫出對學生的倡議。例文點評:例文采用的是一段式,寫的是閱讀的好處,時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時,描述倡議時,描寫細致,條理清晰。高分亮點:短語:Firstly;Secondly;Finally;a good way to do sth;broaden our knowledge and horizon。句型:reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills;reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。10.書面表達(本題15分)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作,請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。為了使生活更美好,社會需要正能量(positive energy)。生活中,我們需要他人的幫助,也要學會幫助他人。請你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言,內容包括:1. 你對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法;2. 說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例;3. 呼吁大家互幫互助,彼此感恩,讓社會充滿正能量。作文要求:1.不得照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名。2.語句連貫,詞數(shù)80個左右。 作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出,不必抄寫在試卷上,也不計入總詞數(shù)。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”(113w)【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文,描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵大家相互幫助,并讓世界充滿正能量。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當增加內容。亮點說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務,語言表達符合英語習慣,準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別適用一些亮點詞句,如be for, adj enough to do, the other day, try one’s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one’s opinion, be supposed to, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor in mine等。增強邏輯關系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準確,句子通順,行文連貫。【點睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起:認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求,抓住要點,詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的,而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮,因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒,就可以動筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞,使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外,還要檢查語法結構是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。