【正文】 s with our teachers and friends.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”為題，用英語簡要描述如何面對中考，并適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：many students are…...，so it is difficult for students to……，we should……，we’d better……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們面對中考會感到擔(dān)心，接下來介紹學(xué)生的現(xiàn)狀以及同學(xué)們給出的建議，最后表達(dá)我的觀點(diǎn)。此處from time to time, pay attention to, lose heart, so that, in one’s opinion, share..with…等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。14．（黑龍江中考模擬）（B）圖示作文：根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，展開想象，寫一篇小短文。小安是一名初三的學(xué)生，運(yùn)動(dòng)讓他的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。請根據(jù)所給圖畫，展開適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想，完成下面的短文。要求：（1）話題作文或圖示作文任選其一。（2）詞數(shù)在80?100詞之間。（3）要求字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮縎port makes a differenceXiao An is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates, so he decided to do sports.He joined Zhao Yang Football club and practiced hard there. Because of football, his life has changed a lot. He finds himself much healthier than before. Now, he has grown into a tall and strong guy. What’s more, he is very good at playing football. Last month, he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award. Xiao An needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于圖畫作文，表達(dá)運(yùn)動(dòng)讓小安的生活發(fā)生了巨大的變化。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如used to do, take medicine, as+形容詞原級+as, decide to do, because of, what’s more, be good at, take part in, not...any more以及make a great difference等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá) 某英語教育網(wǎng)站正在舉辦有關(guān)分享的主題征文活動(dòng)，請你根據(jù)圖示內(nèi)容，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷寫一篇題為“Sharing”的英語短文。注意：，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。SharingIt’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. 【答案】It’s very important for us to learn to share with each other. There’re many things to share in our lives. We can share our happiness or trouble. Some of us like sharing face to face while others prefer to share online like or Wechat.Once, I failed in a Math test. I had difficulty cheering myself up, but I realized keeping worries to myself would make it worse. After sharing it with my friend, I felt much better. Moreover, his words encouraged me a lot. In my opinion, sharing is really helpful. It can bring us more joy and provide us with useful suggestions.【解析】此篇書面表達(dá)的話題是“分享”。首先我們根據(jù)給出的圖表確定要寫的內(nèi)容的提綱，包括：分享什么？為什么分享？怎么分享？然后根據(jù)每個(gè)提綱給出的一些關(guān)鍵詞，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)可能用到的表達(dá)，拓展思維，寫出自己的看法。最后，我們還要注意“分享”的情感教育，讓我們學(xué)有所獲。文章時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。16．（北京中考模擬）交流可以化解矛盾,增進(jìn)友誼。當(dāng)今交流方式很多，但人們之間的情感似乎越來越淡。學(xué)校英語專欄征文，主題是“Ways of Communication Today”。假如你是李華，你對此很感興趣，準(zhǔn)備投稿，談?wù)勀闳粘５慕涣鞣绞郊澳愕母惺堋Ｌ崾驹~語： face to face， chatting on line， discuss，appear 提示問題：How many ways do you know to municate with others?How do you usually municate with your friends? Which is the best way and why?【答案】There are some ways to municate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages. My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls. I think the best way to municate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most wele and useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, munication bees easier and rapider. With the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place. （118） 【解析】這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如municate with others，such as，face to face，body and sign language，chatting on line，have a talk，each other，text messages，talk about，the best way，one of the most wele and useful inventions，easier and rapider，with the help of，keep in touch with，at any time and in any place等。而My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to municate is the mobile ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容可知用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，可把提示的內(nèi)容逐詞翻譯并拓展成不同的句子，最后把這些句子連在一起即可。17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)Relationship and Emotional Attitude （人際關(guān)系和情感態(tài)度）現(xiàn)在社會普遍對90后，00后有一些誤解， 認(rèn)為他們自私、無禮，所以不能很好地與 人溝通，那么，作為一名00后學(xué)生，你又是怎么看待這個(gè)問題的呢? 請結(jié)合你自己和周圍同學(xué)的表現(xiàn)，分別列舉至少三條優(yōu)點(diǎn)和兩條不足之處進(jìn)行描述。要求：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮緼s students born after 1990, we have so many advantages. We are usually kind and helpful. When someone is in trouble, we always give him or her a hand. We are also active. We like to do sports and go traveling. Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after school. Besides, we are imaginative and creative. We always try something new and do everything differently. On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages. Sometimes we can’t express our opinions in proper ways。 sometimes we are a little over confident. And many students have no brothers or sisters, so they may do everything for themselves. These problems may make us seem impolite, even we can’t municate with others well. So it’s the most important for us to learn how to get on well with others.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這篇文章使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in trouble；do sports；On the other hand ；municate with等；When；Besides ；And ；So等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。18．（四川中考模擬）（題文）書