【正文】 的時態(tài)。注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能寫漢語式的英語，而應從句子的整體結構出發(fā)，寫完整的句子?？梢院唵尉浣Y構為主，穿插使用并列句和復合句，調整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，以使文意連貫。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文的描述符合圖片中的內容，敘述非常詳細，并對圖片展開了合理的想象，使文章的內容更加豐富。第二段中發(fā)表了自己的感想，升華了文章的主題。其次短文中句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣，語法規(guī)范，語言得體。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，正確使用了謂語動詞的形式。句子結構以簡單句為主，也使用了賓語從句、狀語從句、定語從句等復合句，提升了文章檔次和水平，整篇文章表達流暢。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如They pete for the first and cheer for the winner.、The student who jumps farthest must share the experience with his classmates.、Though the ball is very heavy, they throw balls again and again until they are satisfied with the result.、I think exercising is very useful to them.、Second, if they do sports every day, they will be healthier than 。14．（陜西西北工業(yè)大學附屬中學中考模擬）保持健康的體魄，擁有健康的生活方式對我們每個人來說都是至關重要的。假如你是李明，你們學校將開展以How to keep healthy，體育鍛煉和好的生活習慣等方面寫一篇演講稿。要求：，意思連貫，書寫工整。（姓名，校名和地名等）:不少于70詞。開頭已經給出。不計入總字數(shù)。（請把標題和已給出的開頭抄寫在答題卡上）HowtokeephealthyHi, Everyone, I39。mgladtogiveaspeechhere.Mytopicis Howtokeep healthy.【答案】 Hi, Everyone, I39。m glad to give a speech here. My topic is How to keep healthy. As students, we should not only study hard but also have strong and healthy bodies. So it is very important to develop a healthy living habit. And there are many things we can do in our daily life to keep healthy. First, keep doing exercise. It can help you reduce pressure and make your body strong. Jogging, walking after meals and dancing are good choice. Second, Develop a good eating habit. Eat more fresh vegetables and fruit instead of junk food and sugar. Third, Enough and good sleep is good for our health. So don’t stay up late. I hope my advice can help you. Thanks for listening.【解析】本文要求以How to keep healthy為題寫一篇演講稿，內容從健康飲食，體育鍛煉和好的生活習慣等方面去表達。文章時態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。在寫作的時候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。在提出建議時，可以使用first，second???進行列舉，使文章顯得更加條理。最后檢查所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求；檢查段落是否完整，句子表達是否準確，語法、拼寫、標點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤。點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡。在提出建議時，可以使用first，second???進行列舉，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；條理性更強。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假設你校正開展“How to be safe on the Internet”的大討論活動，請你結合生活實際寫一封英語小短文介紹有關情況，以幫助他人安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡。短文內容包括以下幾個方面：網(wǎng)絡使用的利弊。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡的幾條規(guī)則。如，和家長有所約定，不向strangers透露（give out）真實的個人信息，不單獨和net friend見面，使用文明語言，等等。希望……要求：詞數(shù)不少于100。 信中須包括所有內容要點，可適當發(fā)揮，使語句通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。 文章中不要出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名。At present, most of us have Internet or Wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone we meet on line alone. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others. I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.【解析】試題分析：本篇作文是一篇小議論文，主要討論如何正確使用網(wǎng)絡的方式。寫作中學生需要緊密貼合題干中已經給出的要點：網(wǎng)絡使用的利弊，利弊都要寫出。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡的幾條規(guī)則。題干中給出了例子，如，和家長有所約定，不向陌生人透露真實的個人信息，不單獨和網(wǎng)友見面，使用文明語言，等等。學生可以在這個基礎上整理自己的語言，羅列出規(guī)則，可以借助實用的祈使句結構。最后收尾要寫出自己的希望。寫作亮點：這篇短文內容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達準確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡清晰，自然流暢，首先完整介紹了網(wǎng)絡使用的利弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介紹了幾條規(guī)則，恰當運用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后結尾提出了倡議，結構完整，段落清晰。16．（山東中考模擬）書面表達隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)和手機終端發(fā)展，成癮性網(wǎng)絡游戲使一些中學生沉迷其中，影響了學習進步和身心健康。上周你們學校開展了一次以“How to keep students away from too many puter games ”為主題的專題討論。請根據(jù)下表中的要點提示，寫一篇短文，提出一些意見。學校要做些什么；，如運動會，外出游玩等；, ……； 家長要做些什么，多陪伴，……；，……；學生要做些什么……（至少兩點）注意 ，可適當發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；，短文開頭已給出，不計總詞數(shù)；；Last week our school had a discussion on How to keep students away from too many puter games .The students have different opinions.【答案】Last week our school had a discussion on how to keep students away from too many puter games. The students have different opinions. They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. Also, good outschool activities should be held regularly in their school, such as having a sports meeting every term and organizing a school trip every year. Besides, teachers can municate with those students who are crazy about games and those who often lose themselves in chatting online as often as possible.When they are at home, they think parents should set examples to them. Fathers and mothers must spend less time on their mobile phones. And then they are able to spare time for their kids and even stay with them most of the time. Working closely with schools is another important way for parents to help them.As students, just as the saying goes:“Study must e first”. They should pay more attention on their studies. They ought to try their best to achieve a balance between play and studies.【解析】這是一篇話題作文。給出了一些要點，并給出了作文的開頭。我們只要用英語正確的把要點表達出來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點就行。動筆前要真人閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，并適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。根據(jù)題目要求，短文是一篇議論文，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第三人稱。寫作中要注意適當使用連詞，注意上下文緊密聯(lián)系。符合邏輯關系。高分句型【1】They think that their school may have class meetings to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet. 他們認為他們的學?？梢蚤_班會，幫助他們認識到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利與弊。動詞不定式to help them realize the advantages and disadvantages of the 。高分句型【2】Also, good outsc