【正文】 owing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country。【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設美麗中國，實現中國夢，農民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學家怎樣做貢獻的。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了為了實現中國夢，中國人正在努力做貢獻，接下來介紹農民、醫(yī)生、警察和科學家如何做貢獻的，最后表示我們作為學生應該做的事。此處make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。15．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔憂。學校英語校刊《英語天地》對此進行調查，假如你是一名校刊小記者，請你就此次調查的結果進行總結，并談談你自己的觀點。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%） popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；（2）文章應包括題中所提的所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學校進行的關于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調查結果進行總結，并談談自己對這件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點用正確的英語表達出來，并使文章內容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內容應主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結構清楚，有層次。寫作時，應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應從句子整體結構出發(fā)，以簡單句為主，穿插并列句和復合句。為提升文章檔次，還應注意使用高級句型和較復雜的句式。語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整、結構清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語言得體，句式準確，符合英語的表達習慣。文章以一般現在時態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、準確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。文章中也出現了一些語法上的小錯誤，總的來說，不影響整篇文章的質量。16．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達同學們，三年的初中生活就要結束了，在我們的成長過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請用英文寫一篇短文，內容包括：1．你在學校或家里曾經遇到的最大問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數80～100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；2．文中不得出現真實的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn39。t frustrated any more.As we all know，practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can39。t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞三年的初中生活展開敘述，寫作前首先要確定三年中遇到的最大問題或煩惱是什么，一件事情即可，然后圍繞這件事情展開敘述，三個寫作要點要面面俱到，可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，人稱為第一人稱，因為文章涉及的內容是曾經發(fā)生過的事情，所以時態(tài)應該用一般過去時來描述發(fā)，寫感想可以用一般現在時態(tài)?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄