【正文】 Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,給我的筆友Peter 寫(xiě)信，介紹我日常生活中的榜樣。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is……，He teaches us how to……，Mr. Green sets a good example for……，I hope to be……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我日常生活中的榜樣是格林先生，接下來(lái)介紹為什么格林先生是我的榜樣，最后我希望長(zhǎng)大后像他一樣。此處be friendly to, be patient with, try to do sth, teach sb sth, help sb do sth, be like, set a good example for sb, hope to do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)76. 連云港開(kāi)展了“真閱讀”工程，為了讓閱讀進(jìn)校園，為了營(yíng)造一種“多讀書(shū)，讀好書(shū)”的良好氛圍，你班將舉行一次主題班會(huì)，要求以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過(guò)的好書(shū)（the book’s name, the time you read, the content, the reason…），并談?wù)勛约旱母形?。注意?. 字?jǐn)?shù)：100個(gè)詞左右，講稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。2. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。A good book that influenced me a lotBoys and girls, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】Boys and girls,As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I learned that whenever we e across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books! That’s all. Thank you!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以 “A good book that influenced me a lot ” 為題作演講，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過(guò)的好書(shū)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：A good book can……，My Life Story by Helen Keller is……，It is about……，we should……，we are supposed to……，let’s read……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了我讀過(guò)的一本好書(shū)的名字，接下來(lái)介紹我讀這本書(shū)的時(shí)間，所讀的內(nèi)容以及閱讀這本書(shū)的原因，最后鼓勵(lì)大家多讀好書(shū)。此處by doingsth, e across, give in, run away, be supposed to, find out, not only, but also, let sb do sth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（四川中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)在中國(guó)歷史上，書(shū)籍一直傳承著人類(lèi)的文明。然而隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，國(guó)民尤其是青少年對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的癡迷，使得閱讀漸漸地退出中學(xué)生的生活。就“如何在學(xué)生中開(kāi)展閱讀活動(dòng)”, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)小短文。提示：。：①在圖書(shū)館閱讀。 ②在班級(jí)建立圖書(shū)角。③同學(xué)間互借。 ④計(jì)劃閱讀時(shí)間及閱讀量?！?要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80詞左右。（2）字跡工整，語(yǔ)言流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，邏輯清晰。（3）文章內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。How to Have Reading Activities______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How to Have Reading ActivitiesAs we all know, it is important for us to read books. It not only makes us know about the world but also helps us relax ourselves. I have some good advice about how to have reading activities.First, we can read in our school library. There are all kinds of books there. It39。s a good place to read. Second, we can set up a reading corner in order to read at any time after class. Third, we can exchange books with one another. It helps develop our cooperation spirit. At last，it39。s necessary to plan reading time and the number of reading books.All in all, we can benefit from colorful reading activities.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，主要內(nèi)容是圍繞由于受到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的影響，青少年對(duì)閱讀漸漸失去興趣這一現(xiàn)象，就如何在學(xué)生中開(kāi)展閱讀活動(dòng)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)小短文。結(jié)合所給的材料可知時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)輔以第三人稱(chēng)。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，注意要理順要點(diǎn)，防止漏寫(xiě)。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。提示要點(diǎn)：。：①在圖書(shū)館閱讀。 ②在班級(jí)建立圖書(shū)角。③同學(xué)間互借。 ④計(jì)劃閱讀時(shí)間及閱讀量?！?18．（四川中考模擬）（題文） 書(shū)面表達(dá)在中學(xué)生機(jī)器人大賽上，出現(xiàn)了一種專(zhuān)門(mén)照顧老人的新型家用智能機(jī)器人，它的主要功能有：1. 定時(shí)做飯、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運(yùn)動(dòng)；3. 處理緊急情況（如：撥打120）假如你是該機(jī)器人的發(fā)明者，請(qǐng)你介紹這個(gè)產(chǎn)品，并談?wù)勀愕奈磥?lái)設(shè)想。要求：1. 意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順；2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；短文的開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） 3. 參考詞匯： at a fixed time 定時(shí)emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。19．（西安市鐵一中學(xué)中考模擬）由于父母的溺愛(ài)，現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學(xué)習(xí)以外的事情，導(dǎo)致獨(dú)立生活能力不強(qiáng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下建議；自己的事情自己做； 家里