【正文】 practice makes perfect熟能生巧，諺語的運用，為文章增添了色彩。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達。隨著連云港經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升，而同時我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴(yán)重，去年我們經(jīng)歷了柳絮漫天飛舞以及數(shù)個霧霾天氣（hazy days），生活環(huán)境日趨惡化。就此，你班展開討論美麗連云港應(yīng)該從何做起，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文，并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點。連云港現(xiàn)狀美麗連云港從我做起未來展望①車輛越來越多②空氣越來越差③…….①出門坐公交，步行，騎車②……③…….①水更清，天更藍②……注意：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；；開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；。Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars. As a result, there is too much traffic on the road and the air pollution bees worse and worse. It has bee impossible for us to see the clear sky as often as before. This not only has a bad effect on our daily life but also does harm to our health. It39。s a worrying problem. Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem. I think there are many things we can do to help. We can take a bus, ride a bike or go somewhere on foot. What39。s more, more trees and grass should be planted to reduce the pollution.. If we try our best, I believe in the future we will have more clear days and clean rivers. Let39。s work together to make a difference to our homeland!【解析】寫作分析：這篇書面表達的背景是空氣污染越來越嚴(yán)重，生活環(huán)境在不斷惡化，需要完成的寫作任務(wù)是，描述連云港的現(xiàn)狀講一講如何從我做起建設(shè)美麗連云港對未來的結(jié)果進行展望。需要注意的是正確使用相關(guān)短語表達和時態(tài)，尤其是在描述展望未來時需要借助將來時，各個部分之間要注意合理連接，保證文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言連貫。寫作亮點：文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出來了，于是可以開始正文的敘述，首先是描述現(xiàn)狀，用到的短語表達準(zhǔn)確，例如too much traffic on the road道路上車輛過多，bees worse and ，does harm to our health對我們的健康有害，也用到了很實用的句型It has bee impossible for us to do…做…對于我們來說已經(jīng)變得不可能了。在銜接下一部分“采取措施”時，用了一句話過度，Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem.（因此，應(yīng)該采取行動來解決這個問題。），最后有對未來的展望，用到了條件句的主將從現(xiàn)，也用到了Let39。s work together to do讓我們一起來做…這樣的句型，總體來說文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，完成了要求的寫作任務(wù)。16．（浙江中考模擬） 書面表達假如你叫Tom。你們學(xué)校正在開設(shè)國際課程，下個月將有新的外教來學(xué)校上課。以下是外教Rhian的微信，請根據(jù)該內(nèi)容回復(fù)一條90詞左右的短信，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 Hey, for your _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hey, for your message.`I am writing to tell you about your things in last are fifty students in our of us like think a good teacher is organized. A good teacher cares and is always ready for his or her students. A good teacher is always fair and respects their students. A good teacher always works hard.The weather is warm may carry some sweaters with needn’t carry heavy have somewhere in your spare time you can go boating on the school you can play football with us.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。假設(shè)你是Tom，學(xué)校正在開設(shè)國際課程，下個月將有新的外教來學(xué)校上課，要求你就外教Rhian的微信回復(fù)一條短信。動筆前一定要認真閱讀外教Rhian的微信，所回的短信中對涉及的問題都要有所回應(yīng)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第二人稱。在寫作的時候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。17．（全國中考模擬）共享單車（shared bikes）在廈門投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，它是國民素質(zhì)的“照妖鏡”，請你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給《21世紀(jì)英文報》寫一篇關(guān)于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽。諸多優(yōu)勢，出行方便，減少污染，負擔(dān)得起存在問題你的觀點我認為……（考生自擬，至少2點）注意事項:，要求語句通順，意思連貫?！澳愕挠^點”一欄用2―3句話展開合理想象。作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shared bikes are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can39。t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it39。s a way of living a green life.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們給《21世紀(jì)英文報》投稿，談一談自己對共享單車的看法。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題以及你自己對這件事情的看法。前兩個內(nèi)容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達，而自己的觀點則需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達出來，要求至少兩點。通過審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或者三段，一個內(nèi)容一段或前兩個內(nèi)容合到一段。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交叉使用，改變文章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調(diào)。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文章意思連貫、表達流暢。用到的短語有reduce pollution 減少污染；What39。s more 此外，take up 占據(jù)，in our way擋我們的路，living a green life 過綠色生活?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點；第三段介紹了一些問題；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，主題明確，有層次性。其次短文中使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式富于變化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it39。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ；另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達流暢。18．（山東中考模擬）寫作現(xiàn)在，戴眼鏡的學(xué)生越來越多，為此，國家把每年 6 月 6 日定為愛眼日。請你結(jié)合自己的體會，就如何愛護眼睛，給校報英語欄目寫一篇短文。提示：1．吃有益于眼睛的食物，如胡蘿卜、雞蛋等；2．多做眼保健操，長時間用眼后可看看遠方；3．養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習(xí)慣，如：不躺著玩手機或看書等。 要求：1．根據(jù)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；3．詞數(shù)90左右。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)） Nowadays, more and more students are getting near173。sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. ____________________________________________ 【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near173。sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June