【正文】 的連接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求給Sam寫了一封信，對他的漢語學(xué)習(xí)提出了一些好的建議。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包括了題目中要求的所有信息。文章主要分成三個(gè)部分：第一段是與Sam之間的問候以及引出Sam學(xué)習(xí)漢語這一話題，并介紹寫信的目的；第二段中是提出的具體的建議，這是這篇文章的主體，所在篇幅最大。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話對整篇文章做了總結(jié)。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，句式結(jié)構(gòu)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，用詞得體。文章中的語句以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。s a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it 。13．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達(dá)我們在生活中總是面對著各種各樣的壓力，這會嚴(yán)重妨礙我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)正開辟專欄討論中學(xué)生如何減壓。假設(shè)你叫李華，請從以下幾個(gè)方面，用英語寫出你的具體做法，向該欄目投稿。；；；。參考詞匯：stressed 注意：；；，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves. Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear editor,There are many ways for us high school students to relax for I feel stressed,I usually municate with my friends,parents or I will do sports with my classmates,such as riding bikes,going swimming and so go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time,39。s more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we will be healthy and learn better .Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求介紹自己面對著各種各樣的壓力是如何做的。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。14．（四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）寫作。Having studied in this school for almost three years, you are about to graduate （畢業(yè)）. There must be something that you will always remember. Please write a passage about your Junior school life. The following points should be included.1. How your junior school life is.2. Things/moments that you won’t forget.3. The regrets in the three years.4. Plans for your future.5. A natural ending.【答案】I39。m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day. In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others. However, I have problems, too. I spent less time sports. So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.【解析】學(xué)生們已經(jīng)度過了三年的初中生活，在這三年里，一定有一些事是他們無法忘記的。這篇作文要求學(xué)生們介紹一下自己的初中生活。題目中列出了一些要點(diǎn)，如初中生活的感受、難忘的事情或時(shí)刻、后悔的事情、未來的計(jì)劃，然后再加上一個(gè)自然的結(jié)尾。寫作時(shí)，我們就可以利用這些要點(diǎn)來組織語言，充實(shí)文章的內(nèi)容。通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過去時(shí)態(tài)為主，注意謂語動詞形式的變化。另一個(gè)難點(diǎn)是英語表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣是不一樣的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句式整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型。可以多用簡單句，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)、主系表結(jié)構(gòu)等，點(diǎn)綴一些并列句和復(fù)合句或較高級的句型，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。合理安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)，注意語句之間的銜接，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，并且結(jié)構(gòu)安排合理，層次清晰。短文首先介紹了自己對三年初中生活、老師以及同學(xué)們的感受；然后介紹了自己在這三年里后悔的事情；接下來是對未來的計(jì)劃以及對老師和同學(xué)們的祝福。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主，謂語動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中長短句結(jié)合，使文章富于變化，有節(jié)奏感。短文中還使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. 、In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. 、I do well in the exams. I am good at municating and I like to make friends with others.、 However, I have problems, too.、 So in the future I will do more sports and bee stronger. 、Wish my school more beautiful, and my teachers and classmates will have a happy life! 、The twomonth holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the 。15．（黑龍江中考模擬）書籍是人類進(jìn)步的階梯，是屹立在知識海洋里的燈塔。英國著名作家培根曾經(jīng)說過：“閱讀使人充實(shí)?！笨梢婇喿x在每個(gè)人的成長過程中都起著至關(guān)重要的作用。請以“Reading Is Important for Us”為題， 用英語寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 讀書的重要原因；2. 你在生活中是如何閱讀的注意：1. 詞數(shù)在80~100詞之間；2. 字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 【答案】Reading Is Important for UsThere is a famous saying, “Reading makes full man.”Reading is very important in our life. It can not only improve our happiness of life but also increase our knowledge. It is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language.When I was young, I was interested in reading. So I have been good at writing since my childhood. How to read books? We can do something that follows.First, we should develop the habit of reading. Second, we must pay much attention to books we choose. Reading books do more good than harm to us. So let’s start reading more from now on!【解析】本文屬于話題作文，要表達(dá)閱讀的重要性。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如not only...but also..., one of+the 形容詞最高級+名詞復(fù)數(shù), be interested in, be good at, develop a good habit, pay attention to以及from now on等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。16．（甘肅中考模擬）（年浙江紹興）書面表達(dá)。“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)（結(jié)果見下表）。請據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會計(jì)劃未來……（至少兩條）注意：（1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；（2）你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)：80—100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：尊重respect短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and i