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Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是：你們學(xué)校英文報刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文，你來為校刊投稿，談一談如何創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。這是一篇開放性的作文，題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個提綱，具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來充實完成。因此首先我們要仔細(xì)思考這個問題，結(jié)合自己的真實生活，想一想平時是怎么做的，應(yīng)該怎么做。這是寫作中的一個難點。另外一個難點是使用正確的英語將自己的所想表達(dá)出來，英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，寫作時，不能逐詞去翻譯，而應(yīng)從文章、句子的整體考慮，首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時態(tài)來敘述；可能用到哪些詞匯、短語和句型，每個句子應(yīng)以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，然后再變化成較高級、復(fù)雜是句型，如復(fù)合句、非謂語動詞形式等。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述，符合題目要求。語法規(guī)范，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。文章中以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用復(fù)雜句型、短文和較高級的句型，提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。14．（北京中考模擬）我區(qū)正在全力創(chuàng)建全國文明城區(qū)。假如你是李華，上周日參加了學(xué)校組織的志愿活動。請你用英語寫一篇短文給某英文網(wǎng)站投稿，談?wù)勀銈內(nèi)チ四睦铮阕隽耸裁?，以及你的感受。提示詞語：Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, tired，proud提示問題：● Where did you go? ● What did you do?● How did you feel?Last Sunday 【答案】Last Sunday I participated in “build a civilized city”activitity in Muhu Park. It39。s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don39。t throw litter or spit about. It39。s good manners to say Thank you and Please and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus,we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we39。d better not talk or laugh loudly in public. I think we should put up posters to tell people how to behave well to build a civilized city. If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more we are tired,we had a good time.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹周日參加的學(xué)校組織的志愿活動。動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；以提示的問題作為寫作的主線，重點從三個方面去寫作：？？？結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，運用一般過去時態(tài)進行敘述。在談到自己感受的時候用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。15．（河北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你叫李華,你的筆友Peter 想了解你日常生活中的榜樣? 請你以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,根據(jù)下列提示給他寫一封郵件?提示:1. Who is your role model in your daily life?2. Why do you consider him/ her as your role model?3. How do you feel to have him/ her as your role model?注意:1. 短文必須包括所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名,校名和地名。3. 詞數(shù):80個左右?（開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù)）To: PeterFrom: Li Hua Subject: A Role Model in My Daily LifeHi! Peter,How is it going? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua 【答案】How is it going ? You’re asking my role model in my daily life. Well, my role model in my daily life is my teacher, Mr. Green. He is very friendly to us and he has a good sense of humor. He is patient with all the students in class and tries to make his class interesting. We never feel bored. He teaches us how to think by ourselves and helps us solve the problems at school. He is like a father to us. Mr. Green sets a good example for me in my life. He is such a great teacher and I’m proud of being his student. I hope to be a teacher like him when I grow up. Anything new at your school? Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以“A Role Model in My Daily Life”為主題,給我的筆友Peter 寫信，介紹我日常生活中的榜樣。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：He is……，He teaches us how to……，Mr. Green sets a good example for……，I hope to be……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我日常生活中的榜樣是格林先生，接下來介紹為什么格林先生是我的榜樣，最后我希望長大后像他一樣。此處be friendly to, be patient with, try to do sth, teach sb sth, help sb do sth, be like, set a good example for sb, hope to do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達(dá)（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔(dān)憂。學(xué)校英語?？队⒄Z天地》對此進行調(diào)查，假如你是一名?？∮浾?，請你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%） popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________