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_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【答案】Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.I am busy preparing for the Senior High School Entrance Examination these days. I’m working harder than ever before so that I can enter my ideal senior high school. All of my teachers are willing to devote themselves to helping us. Of all the subjects, Engligh is always my favourite. In class we practise listening and speaking . My English teacher is patient enough to explain English grammar to I have some trouble, I often go to my Engligh teacher, she can always help me with my trouble, and cheer me up.How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【解析】這是一篇回復(fù)書(shū)信類的提綱作文。內(nèi)容為根據(jù)郵件的內(nèi)容及自己的實(shí)際情況回復(fù)郵件。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱為第一人稱。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括:你一切都好嗎?你覺(jué)得你的英語(yǔ)課怎么樣?當(dāng)你遇到麻煩時(shí),你會(huì)找誰(shuí)去幫忙?在動(dòng)筆前,要認(rèn)真審題,根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)列出每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá),然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),需要注意書(shū)信體裁的格式,要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;注意表達(dá)的條理性、連貫性,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡符合邏輯關(guān)系;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。18.(四川中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)根據(jù)青少年讀書(shū)少的現(xiàn)象,請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份向全校同學(xué)提出的倡議。讀書(shū)的意義獲取知識(shí),增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí),使人聰明,使人快樂(lè),有助于學(xué)習(xí),有助于成長(zhǎng)。目前的狀況聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、看電視、上網(wǎng)等占去了學(xué)生大部分的讀書(shū)時(shí)間。發(fā)出倡議多讀書(shū),讀好書(shū)。注意:詞數(shù)80左右;倡議書(shū)的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);倡議書(shū)須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),行文連貫,表達(dá)清楚。參考詞匯:gain knowledge獲取知識(shí)。 open the mind增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí).My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life, Let’s start reading now!【答案】My dear friends,Reading is very important in our life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow as a person. However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as listening to music, watching TV and going online take up much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books and read good books. It will do us good!Let’s start reading now!【解析】本文是一篇倡議書(shū)。要求根據(jù)青少年讀書(shū)少的現(xiàn)象,根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份向全校同學(xué)提出的倡議書(shū)。內(nèi)容包括讀書(shū)的意義、大部分學(xué)生目前的狀況、最后發(fā)出倡議。本文時(shí)態(tài)要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱用第一人稱。本文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,考生需要把所提示的內(nèi)容逐條翻譯成英文,要涵蓋提示內(nèi)容的所有要點(diǎn),同時(shí)注意理順要點(diǎn),防止漏寫(xiě)。寫(xiě)作中可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮,注意語(yǔ)句要通順,上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系;同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,詞匯書(shū)寫(xiě)無(wú)誤,注意不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,避免句式單一,這樣會(huì)使文章更出色。19.(江蘇中考模擬)書(shū)面表達(dá)每年的4月23日是世界讀書(shū)日,這個(gè)紀(jì)念日的意義在于推動(dòng)更多人去閱讀。假如你校將開(kāi)展“讀好書(shū),促成長(zhǎng)”活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的主題,向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議。讀書(shū)的意義 1. 獲取知識(shí),開(kāi)闊視野 2. 使人愉悅,益于學(xué)習(xí) 3. ……(自由發(fā)揮)現(xiàn)狀 1. 作業(yè)多,無(wú)良好讀書(shū)習(xí)慣 2. 不知道讀什么書(shū),不會(huì)選擇倡議 ……(至少兩點(diǎn))注意:1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2. 短文須包括所有要點(diǎn),不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life. First of all,reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books.It can also help to open up a whole new world to us.Second,reading will/can make us clever and happy.It is good for our study and it can help us grow up.Third,reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful. However,there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。t have enough time for reading.Moreover,some of us don39。t have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet. In my opinion,our school can have aReading Weekonce a term.Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library.We must spend more time reading some useful books.As a result,we can have a better future. Let39。s start reading now!【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ),例如first of all,all kinds of books,help to do,be good for,more and further,so much,spend too much time doing,search the Internet,in my opinion,as a result等。同時(shí)First of all,/ Second,/ Third等時(shí)間副詞和However/ Moreover / As a result等結(jié)構(gòu)副詞的運(yùn)用,既使文章的思路清晰、層次分明,還豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛:書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。20.(河南中考模擬)親愛(ài)的同學(xué),三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活馬上就要結(jié)束了,請(qǐng)你以“My English Study”為題,請(qǐng)你談一談,這三年以來(lái),你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的心得體會(huì)。要求:、解決的方法以及學(xué)習(xí)感悟。條理清晰,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。否則,試卷按零分處理。【答案】My English StudyHow time flies! My threeyear middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.【解析】【詳解】短文第一句Looking back, I have many memories of my English 。接下來(lái)敘述自己遇到的各種學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的困難:聽(tīng)不懂老師的英語(yǔ),記憶詞匯短語(yǔ)有困難等等。分別列出,行文流暢。用短語(yǔ)give up放棄,表示困難太大,難倒了自己。后來(lái)在老師的幫助下,克服了困難。逐步地Step by step,不斷取得進(jìn)步。最后一句In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it ,結(jié)束全文。