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a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student.70 percent of the students agree with you. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do well in sports or arts. So they can learn from each other, and they may develop a friendship.However, 30 percent of the students don’t agree. They think some slower students always talk in class instead of listening to the teachers carefully. On the other hand, slower students often ask questions and they may influence others.I think I’d like to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other. We can make progress together. YoursLi Ping【解析】 這是一篇圖表,你班班主任在安排座位時,讓成績好的學生和成績差的學生同桌,這在學生中引起了反響,班會課上大家就此進行了討論。現(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)表格把討論結(jié)果向班主任寫一封信反映一下,并說出自己的觀點。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點,圍繞要點組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來,在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意標點符號及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系,語意連貫。agree with sb同意某人;be good at擅長; learn from each other互相學習15.(湖北中考模擬)書面表達初中生即將結(jié)束,學校英語俱樂部特邀你寫一篇英語短文,給七年級新生的學習生活提幾點建議。 內(nèi)容要點如下:,好的學習方法很重要;,保持健康;,使學校生活豐富;,多交朋友;。注意:,不計入總詞數(shù)。,詞數(shù)80詞左右。參考詞匯:method club. n 社團 colorful Wele to our school! 【答案】Wele to our school!I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.【解析】本文是一篇給材料作文。要求是給七年級新生的學習生活提幾點建議,所以人稱主要用第二人稱,時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。在寫作過程中,首先要將所提供給的信息要點用英語正確的表達出來,要涵蓋所提到的所有要點,同時注意理順要點,防止漏寫,可適當發(fā)揮。同時在寫作的時候,注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性。要注意準確運用時態(tài),語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后檢查所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求;檢查段落是否完整,句子表達是否準確,語法、拼寫、標點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。16.(湖北中考模擬)書面表達同學們,三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了,在我們的成長過程中,既有快樂,也有煩惱。請用英文寫一篇短文,內(nèi)容包括:1.你在學?;蚣依镌?jīng)遇到的最大問題或煩惱;2.你解決問題或煩惱的過程;3.你的感想。要求: 1.詞數(shù)80~100,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years,not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day,but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better,even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem?On the one hand,I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand,I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result,I spent less time on homework,and I wasn39。t frustrated any more.As we all know,practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can39。t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞三年的初中生活展開敘述,寫作前首先要確定三年中遇到的最大問題或煩惱是什么,一件事情即可,然后圍繞這件事情展開敘述,三個寫作要點要面面俱到,可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時,人稱為第一人稱,因為文章涉及的內(nèi)容是曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的事情,所以時態(tài)應該用一般過去時來描述發(fā),寫感想可以用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)?!靖叻志湫鸵弧縄 did the homework①as quickly as possible ②instead of being slow or absent ,而不是遲鈍或心不在焉。①as…as possible盡可能…②instead of 代替 而不是,后跟動名詞?!靖叻志湫投緼s we know,practice makes perfect我們都知道,熟能生巧。practice makes perfect熟能生巧,諺語的運用,為文章增添了色彩。17.(四川中考模擬)(題文) 書面表達在中學生機器人大賽上,出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機器人,它的主要功能有:1. 定時做飯、洗衣服; 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運動;3. 處理緊急情況(如:撥打120)假如你是該機器人的發(fā)明者,請你介紹這個產(chǎn)品,并談談你的未來設想。要求:1. 意思連貫,語句通順;2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右;短文的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù)) 3. 參考詞匯: at a fixed time 定時emergency 緊急情況 cpany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I’d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also acpany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What’s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I’m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如thank you for doing,I’d like to do,introduce sb. to,all of you,at home,do some washing,at a fixed time,have a chat,play chess,do exercise,deal with,a great help,in the future等。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the