【正文】 從三個方面去寫作：？？？結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，運用一般過去時態(tài)進行敘述。在談到自己感受的時候用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假定你叫John，最近從報紙上得知英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請給該公司寫封電子郵件。要點如下：表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；感到擔憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息。適當提出一點你的建議。注意：1．詞數(shù)80—100；2．請不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir or Madam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully, John【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.Would you please offer us more information about it?I39。m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours faithfully,John【解析】這是一篇提綱作文。內(nèi)容是針對英國某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠這件事，寫一封電子郵件，表達歡迎和你的擔憂。注意電子郵件的格式，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱?？忌枰紫葘徢逯黝}，圍繞主題展開作文。要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性；文章必須涵蓋所提供的各個提綱要點，不要遺漏。行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。作文完成后，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏需要表達的要點和細節(jié)。本文的寫作要點：1．表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；2．感到擔憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；3．希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息；最后，適當提出一點你的建議。16．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達（原創(chuàng)）今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔憂。學校英語?？队⒄Z天地》對此進行調(diào)查，假如你是一名?？∮浾撸埬憔痛舜握{(diào)查的結(jié)果進行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%） popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息。As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough munication with their family members .They may feel a little lonelyPersonally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學校進行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩@件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語言，將這些要點用正確的英語表達出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對者們的理由；自己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡單句為主，穿插并列句和復合句。為提升文章檔次，還應(yīng)注意使用高級句型和較復雜的句式。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語言得體，句式準確，符合英語的表達習慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、準確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can39。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯誤，總的來說，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。17．（天津中考模擬）書面表達 假設(shè)你叫李明，曾榮幸成為天津國際馬拉松賽的一名志愿者。請根據(jù)以下要點，用英文寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勥@一段美好的經(jīng)歷。（1）年4月國際馬拉松賽在天津舉行；（2）作為志愿者，賽前接受了培訓；（3）在閑暇時間里，和運動員用英語交談，為他們提供幫助；（4）和許多運動員成為了朋友，也了解了許多不同的文化；（5）你認為……參考詞匯：志愿者 volunteer要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（2）演講稿的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon________________________________________________________【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,.Before the game, volunteers were given a training. In our spare time, we talked to the athletes in English to help we are friends with many the same time,we also learn about many different cultures.I think the experience is good for me.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如be glad to do，talk about，Tianjin International Marathon，hold on，in spare time，talk to，in English，at the same time，learn about，different cultures，be good for等。而Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,./Before the game, volunteers were given a think the exp