【正文】 long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我閱讀了關于環(huán)保的書后的很大變化。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：It is our duty to……，I went to……，And I used to……，And I try to……，I think……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了保護環(huán)境是我們的職責，我閱讀了關于環(huán)保的書后有很大變化，接下來介紹我過去和現(xiàn)在在環(huán)保方面有什么樣的變化，最后作為中學生我們應如何保護環(huán)境。此處in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達在英語課上，同學們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開了討論。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，匯報討論結果，并談談自己的想法。團隊旅游◆有導游，不會迷路；◆不必自己找食宿◆結識朋友，互相幫助個人旅游◆自由安排時間；◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點；◆學會照顧自己你的想法……注意事項：1．文章必須包括表中全部內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)；2．想法至少在兩句以上；3．詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：團隊旅游travel with a group 個人旅游travel aloneRecently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide39。s help, they won39。t get lost and they don39。t need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．However, other students prefer to travel alone． That39。s because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What39。s more, it39。s a chance for them to learn to look afterthemselves．For me, I39。d like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求談談自己對不同的旅游方式的看法。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。17．（長沙麓山國際實驗學校中考模擬）書面表達 75. 初中生活馬上就要結束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想要求：（1）應包含以上全部的信息，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；（2）詞數(shù)：80字左右（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學校名和地名。_____________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve bee interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to bee one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others。【解析】英語作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。get on well with相處融洽；help each other and learn from each other互相幫助，互相學習；with one’s help在某人的幫助下；in the future. 在未來；e true.（夢想）成真18．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達。隨著連云港經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升，而同時我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴重，去年我們經(jīng)歷了柳絮漫天飛舞以及數(shù)個霧霾天氣（hazy days），生活環(huán)境日趨惡化。就此，你班展開討論美麗連云港應該從何做起，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文，并談談自己的觀點。連云港現(xiàn)狀美麗連云港從我做起未來展望①車輛越來越多②空氣越來越差③…….①出門坐公交，步行，騎車②……③…….①水更清，天更藍②……注意：，可適當發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；；開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；。Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars. As a result, there is too much traffic on the road and the air pollution bees worse and worse. It has bee impossible for us to see the clear sky as often as before. This not only has a bad effect on our daily life but also does harm to our health. It39。s a worrying problem. Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem. I think there are many things we can do to help. We can take a bus, ride a bike or go somewhere on foot. What39。s more, more trees and grass should be planted to reduce the pollution.. If we try our best, I believe in the future we will have more clear days and clean rivers. Let39。s work together to make a difference to our homeland!【解析】寫作分析：這篇書面表達的背景是空氣污染越來越嚴重，生活環(huán)境在不斷惡化，需要完成的寫作任務是，描述連云港的現(xiàn)狀講一講如何從我做起建設美麗連云港對未來的結果進行展望。需要注意的是正確使用相關短語表達和時態(tài)，尤其是在描述展望未來時需要借助將來時，各個部分之間要注意合理連接，保證文章結構完整，語言連貫。寫作亮點：文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出來了，于是可以開始正文的敘述，首先是描述現(xiàn)狀，用到的短語表達準確，例如too much traffic on the road道路上車輛過多，bees worse and ，does harm to our health對我們的健康有害，也用到了很實用的句型It has bee impossible for us to do…做…對于我們來說已經(jīng)變得不可能了。在銜接下一部分“采取措施”時，用了一句話過度，Therefore, action