【正文】 long as possible and recycle them they are old. And I always remember to take my own bag when shopping.I think as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書(shū)后的很大變化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It is our duty to……，I went to……，And I used to……，And I try to……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)，我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書(shū)后有很大變化，接下來(lái)介紹我過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在在環(huán)保方面有什么樣的變化，最后作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)如何保護(hù)環(huán)境。此處in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)在英語(yǔ)課上，同學(xué)們就自己喜歡的旅游方式展開(kāi)了討論。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，匯報(bào)討論結(jié)果，并談?wù)勛约旱南敕?。團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游◆有導(dǎo)游，不會(huì)迷路；◆不必自己找食宿◆結(jié)識(shí)朋友，互相幫助個(gè)人旅游◆自由安排時(shí)間；◆選擇自己喜歡的旅游景點(diǎn)；◆學(xué)會(huì)照顧自己你的想法……注意事項(xiàng)：1．文章必須包括表中全部?jī)?nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2．想法至少在兩句以上；3．詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：團(tuán)隊(duì)旅游travel with a group 個(gè)人旅游travel aloneRecently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, we have discussed the ways to go travelling．Here is the result．Some students choose to travel with a group．With a guide39。s help, they won39。t get lost and they don39。t need to look for hotels or restaurants by themselves．Besides, they can make friends and help each other while travelling．However, other students prefer to travel alone． That39。s because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favourite sights．What39。s more, it39。s a chance for them to learn to look afterthemselves．For me, I39。d like to travel alone．I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like． In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better．【解析】這是一篇圖表，要求談?wù)勛约簩?duì)不同的旅游方式的看法。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。17．（長(zhǎng)沙麓山國(guó)際實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá) 75. 初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請(qǐng)你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過(guò)和事后你的感想要求：（1）應(yīng)包含以上全部的信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；（2）詞數(shù)：80字左右（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。_____________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve bee interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to bee one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others?！窘馕觥坑⒄Z(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語(yǔ)法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯?xiě)出確切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語(yǔ)作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡。英語(yǔ)作文，要忠實(shí)于材料，不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語(yǔ)，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫(xiě)錯(cuò)句。get on well with相處融洽；help each other and learn from each other互相幫助，互相學(xué)習(xí)；with one’s help在某人的幫助下；in the future. 在未來(lái)；e true.（夢(mèng)想）成真18．（江蘇中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)。隨著連云港經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升，而同時(shí)我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴(yán)重，去年我們經(jīng)歷了柳絮漫天飛舞以及數(shù)個(gè)霧霾天氣（hazy days），生活環(huán)境日趨惡化。就此，你班展開(kāi)討論美麗連云港應(yīng)該從何做起，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)。連云港現(xiàn)狀美麗連云港從我做起未來(lái)展望①車輛越來(lái)越多②空氣越來(lái)越差③…….①出門坐公交，步行，騎車②……③…….①水更清，天更藍(lán)②……注意：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；；開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；。Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars. As a result, there is too much traffic on the road and the air pollution bees worse and worse. It has bee impossible for us to see the clear sky as often as before. This not only has a bad effect on our daily life but also does harm to our health. It39。s a worrying problem. Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem. I think there are many things we can do to help. We can take a bus, ride a bike or go somewhere on foot. What39。s more, more trees and grass should be planted to reduce the pollution.. If we try our best, I believe in the future we will have more clear days and clean rivers. Let39。s work together to make a difference to our homeland!【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)的背景是空氣污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重，生活環(huán)境在不斷惡化，需要完成的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是，描述連云港的現(xiàn)狀講一講如何從我做起建設(shè)美麗連云港對(duì)未來(lái)的結(jié)果進(jìn)行展望。需要注意的是正確使用相關(guān)短語(yǔ)表達(dá)和時(shí)態(tài)，尤其是在描述展望未來(lái)時(shí)需要借助將來(lái)時(shí)，各個(gè)部分之間要注意合理連接，保證文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)言連貫。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出來(lái)了，于是可以開(kāi)始正文的敘述，首先是描述現(xiàn)狀，用到的短語(yǔ)表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，例如too much traffic on the road道路上車輛過(guò)多，bees worse and ，does harm to our health對(duì)我們的健康有害，也用到了很實(shí)用的句型It has bee impossible for us to do…做…對(duì)于我們來(lái)說(shuō)已經(jīng)變得不可能了。在銜接下一部分“采取措施”時(shí)，用了一句話過(guò)度，Therefore, action