【正文】 句不好把握，就盡量使用短句。14．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校打算舉辦一場以“感恩老師”為主題的活動。請根據(jù)以下要點，給你的美國筆友Mike 寫一封郵件，介紹這次的活動。時間：5月30號活動內(nèi)容： 1. 給老師獻花致敬；2. 把寫滿感謝祝福話語的卡片貼在墻上；3. 為老師表演節(jié)目（put on performances）你的感觸：……注意： 1. 詞數(shù)80100；2． 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in will put up the thanknotes on the that we put on performances for our teachers.What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹以“感恩老師”為主題的活動。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Our school will hold……，On the day we will……，We thank them for……，I am……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們學(xué)校舉行了一個感恩老師的活動，接下來介紹我們的活動內(nèi)容，最后表達我的感觸。此處give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。15．（北京中考模擬）假如你叫李華，最近你班里的美國交換生Lucy想要感受中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。周末你和父母商議后，打算邀請她去老舍茶館。你通過微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何時何地見面。提示詞語：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示問題：Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過微信告訴Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時何地見面。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想要邀請你去老舍茶館，接下來介紹我們?nèi)ツ抢镒鍪裁?，最后指出我們要在何時何地見面。此處want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（四川中考模擬）書面表達現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物，網(wǎng)購已成為流行趨勢，二網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的焦點，請參考下面的信息，并結(jié)合就的觀點些一短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。，可以在家買東西，不受時間限制。，可以買到當(dāng)?shù)貨]有的商品。價格較便宜。；實物和圖片有差距。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要寫一篇小議論文，主題是網(wǎng)上購物，需要討論到網(wǎng)上購物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，可以先總起陳述，然后用一段來描述優(yōu)點，再用一段描述劣勢和不足，最后一段收尾，這樣的作文就會條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。具體來說，每個觀點在陳述的時候要注意表達準確。寫作亮點：首段總起介紹，挑明這篇作文的主題Internet Shopping。第二段開始描述優(yōu)勢，這里用到了“無論什么時候你喜歡/想要”（whenever you like）結(jié)構(gòu)，在表達“...是開放的”也很準確，用了“be open”。比較級的應(yīng)用也相對準確，例如cheaper。連詞的使用也是亮點，besides意為“除此之外”。在談到劣勢的時候引用了俗語“Every coin has two sides.”，是個亮點?！癢hat’s more”也被合理使用到了，意為“此外”，避免與besides重復(fù)，體現(xiàn)了文章語言的多樣性?？傮w來說要點均被提及，語言準確富有活力。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達。隨著連云港經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，私家車的數(shù)量不斷攀升，而同時我們的空氣污染越發(fā)嚴重，去年我們經(jīng)歷了柳絮漫天飛舞以及數(shù)個霧霾天氣（hazy days），生活環(huán)境日趨惡化。就此，你班展開討論美麗連云港應(yīng)該從何做起，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文，并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點。連云港現(xiàn)狀美麗連云港從我做起未來展望①車輛越來越多②空氣越來越差③…….①出門坐公交，步行，騎車②……③…….①水更清，天更藍②……注意：，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；；開頭已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；。Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Make Lianyungang More BeautifulWith the development of Lianyungang, more and more families have their own cars. As a result, there is too much traffic on the road and the air pollution bees worse and worse. It has bee impossible for us to see the clear sky as often as before. This not only has a bad effect on our daily life but also does harm to our health. It39。s a worrying problem. Therefore, action should be taken to deal with this problem. I think there are many things we can do to help. We can take a bus, ride a bike or go somewhere on foot. What39。s more, more trees and grass should be planted to reduce the pollution.. If we try our best, I believe in the future we will have more clear days and clean rivers. Let39。s work together to make a difference to our homeland!【解析】寫作分析：這篇書面表達的背景是空氣污染越來越嚴重，生活環(huán)境在不斷惡化，需要完成的寫作任務(wù)是，描述連云港的現(xiàn)狀講一講如何從我做起建設(shè)美麗連云港對未來的結(jié)果進行展望。需要注意的是正確使用相關(guān)短語表達和時態(tài)，尤其是在描述展望未來時需要借助將來時，各個部分之間要注意合理連接，保證文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整