【正文】 ir strengths and then they are strict with they are sad,it is fun to think ,they forget the pressure of learning.However, others think it is a waste of time and energy to chase stars. And it also affects their studies. They can’t face the reality and always dreams of being a famous star. In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As students, we should learn from them. Only in this way can we bee useful persons in the future.【解析】【詳解】寫作思路：根據(jù)所給提示可知，本篇作文可以分三步進(jìn)行，首先分別列舉正反雙方的觀點(diǎn)，然后擺出自己的看法，并總結(jié)作為青少年的我們應(yīng)該怎么做。列舉觀點(diǎn)時(shí)要思路清晰，具有條理性。本篇作文，首先以Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university ，接著Some people think….When they are sad, .... Also,…列出一些人贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由，中間用到when以及also 這樣的詞使表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，且具有連貫性。However, others think…用however轉(zhuǎn)折之后接著列出不贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由。然后In my opinion….巧妙運(yùn)用過渡語(yǔ)，列出自己的觀點(diǎn)。 We should….針對(duì)我們青少年應(yīng)該怎么做，給出自己的建議?？偨Y(jié)流暢自然，渾然天成。14．（北京中考模擬）自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂。擁有自信，人生處處是舞臺(tái)，生活越來(lái)越精彩。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你為?？⒄Z(yǔ)園地“自信助我成長(zhǎng)”專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾裕窒硪淮问鼓愀幼孕诺慕?jīng)歷，并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧Ｌ崾驹~語(yǔ)：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing提示問題：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。15．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的不斷發(fā)展，傳統(tǒng)的學(xué)習(xí)模式受到?jīng)_擊?！熬W(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”這一新的學(xué)習(xí)模式備受青睞。假設(shè)你是陳欣，最近某英文雜志正在討論中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進(jìn)行在線學(xué)習(xí)。以下是你所在班級(jí)的討論情況，請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)投稿，反映討論結(jié)果并談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕?。提示：觀點(diǎn)贊成反對(duì)理由1. 網(wǎng)上資源（resource）豐富2. 可以自由（freedom）選擇學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容和時(shí)間1. 網(wǎng)上信息太多，有些不真實(shí)2. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間用電腦對(duì)眼睛不好要求：詞數(shù)不少于80詞，稿件的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。向子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容合理，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名。Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and the Internet is filled with useful resources. What’s more, learners have freedom to decide what and when to learn. However, some students don’t wele it. Although, they think there’s a lot of information on the Internet. Some information isn’t true. Also, spending a long time searching information online is bad for their eyes.In my opinion, every coin has two ideas. I think it’s better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)（online learning）”為話題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文應(yīng)運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。文中more convenient，is filled with, what’s more, a lot of ，however, although, spend... doing...,be bad for, in my opinion等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文中還多處使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、讓步狀語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)等句式，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。16．（四川中考模擬）（題文）書面表達(dá)課外活動(dòng)可以讓我們?cè)鲩L(zhǎng)知識(shí)，發(fā)展智力，開闊視野和塑造性格。許多學(xué)校創(chuàng)造性地開展了課外活動(dòng)，如朗誦、唱歌、講故事、演話劇、辦刊物以及舉辦各種體育活動(dòng)等。最近，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開設(shè)了“Afterclass Activities”的欄目。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動(dòng)。；；。注意： 80 以上；、校名及地名；（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activities are being more and more popular in junior schools.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afterclass ActivitiesNowadays, afterclass activities are being more and more popular in junior schools. In our school there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and improving my skills, they also free me from the heavy work of study.Here I have some suggestions. To students, we’d better choose the activities which interest us and suit us。 Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework.Dear friends, please act