【正文】 hat they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life. Now we have bee close friends. I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school. I will call on more people to help them.【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于學(xué)校正在開展“愛心傳遞，從我做起”主題教育活動，談?wù)勛约旱目捶?；英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。It’s+形容詞+for sb to do sth做某事對某人來說是怎樣的；make great progress 取得巨大進步14．（河南中考模擬）書面表達你們學(xué)校的生活豐富多彩嗎？請以“Colorful weekdays”為題，介紹一下你們學(xué)校周一至周五（weekdays）都有哪些課外活動。要求：1. 語意連貫，層次清晰；2. 要有評價性描述；3. 詞數(shù)80左右。【答案】Colorful weekdaysIt is my honor to show you our colorful activities and today I mainly tell you something about the part time activities in my school. Here is an introduction of my school’s part time activity. Our school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4：20 and end at 5：20 every day. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, and sports meeting and so on. Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival the most. Because the activities are wonderful.So I really hope that we can have less homework so we can have more time to participate in the part time activities to relax ourselves. Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in my school!【解析】話題作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達假如你是李磊，中考（Senior High School Entrance Examination）在即，你在英國的筆友Andy給你發(fā)來電子郵件，想了解你近階段的學(xué)習(xí)情況。請認真閱讀下面的郵件，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容及你的實際用英語回復(fù)。To: lilei@From: andyblack@Subject:School lifeDear Li Lei,It is nearly two months since I last received your . I hear the Senior High School Entrance Examination is ing in Wuxi! How is everything going with you? What do you think about your English classes? Who would you go for help when you have some trouble? Wish you good luck! Write to me soon.All the best,Andy要求：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 回復(fù)須符合郵件話題，結(jié)合自己情況適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫通順；3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【答案】Dear Andy, Thank you for your . I am very glad to tell you something about my school life.I am busy preparing for the Senior High School Entrance Examination these days. I’m working harder than ever before so that I can enter my ideal senior high school. All of my teachers are willing to devote themselves to helping us. Of all the subjects, Engligh is always my favourite. In class we practise listening and speaking . My English teacher is patient enough to explain English grammar to I have some trouble, I often go to my Engligh teacher, she can always help me with my trouble, and cheer me up.How about your school life? I’m look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerelyLiLei【解析】這是一篇回復(fù)書信類的提綱作文。內(nèi)容為根據(jù)郵件的內(nèi)容及自己的實際情況回復(fù)郵件。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。寫作要點包括：你一切都好嗎？你覺得你的英語課怎么樣？當(dāng)你遇到麻煩時，你會找誰去幫忙？在動筆前，要認真審題，根據(jù)寫作要點列出每個要點中可能要用到的表達，然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，需要注意書信體裁的格式，要符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；注意表達的條理性、連貫性，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡符合邏輯關(guān)系；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。最后要細心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。16．（北京中考模擬）自信賦予人力量，帶給人快樂。擁有自信，人生處處是舞臺，生活越來越精彩。假如你是李華，請你為校刊英語園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾裕窒硪淮问鼓愀幼孕诺慕?jīng)歷，并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。提示詞語：powerful，happy，believe in，keep doing提示問題：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we bee more confident?It39。s very important to be confident【答案】It’s very important to be confident. Selfconfidence can bring us courage to stick to what we do. So it’s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have bee more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含表格中所提供的所有信息。靈活運用各種句式，采用不同的表達方式將各個要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準確，簡潔。最后必須認真查驗是否有漏寫，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。點睛：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如at the beginning of； know about；make a speech等；When ；Although ；Then ；From then on,等的運用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯的范文。17．（黑龍江中考模擬）話題作文：根據(jù)漢語提示和要求寫一篇短文。（A和B兩篇，可任選一篇）現(xiàn)在有許多新的購物方式，網(wǎng)上購物就是其中的一種。越來越多的人熟悉和喜歡網(wǎng)購，但是網(wǎng)購有利有弊，請根據(jù)下面提供的信息用英語以“Online shopping”為題寫一篇短文，描述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點和缺點，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?yōu)點：可以在任何時候購物；只需要一臺電腦和鼠標；方便比較同類產(chǎn)品的價格，可以省錢；無論何時何地都可以收到所購物品。缺點：網(wǎng)上付款有時不安全；看不到實物，也不能試穿衣服。注意：語意連貫，表達準確；詞數(shù)80－100。字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮?！敬鸢浮縊nline shoppingThere are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.Online shopping has several advantages. First, you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a puter and mouse. Third, you can pare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. You can’t see the product or try the clothes on.I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no