【正文】 。s worked hard. He39。s tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He39。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如Ladies and Gentlemen，first of all，thank you for doing，give me a chance，be from，three years ago，get along with，be strict with，try his best to do，leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us./ We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。17．（山西農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)附屬學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達社會需要愛，時代呼喚愛。對善行、對愛心的感動，存在于每個人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感動，而是一種顯示感動的勇氣。請為你身邊的人或事點贊，讓“點贊”成為傳遞正能量的一種行動吧！是什么行為讓你點贊？講述一件你點贊的事情。你從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么？讓我們一起分享吧！請根據(jù)以下提示要點，寫一篇文章。注意：1．詞數(shù)：80左右；2．不要出現(xiàn)真實的人名及校名。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “l(fā)ike” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “l(fā)ike” buttonWhat could you learn from him/her? 【答案】I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，講述一件我點贊的事情，我從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我要點贊的人，接下來介紹他的情況，最后指出我從他身上學(xué)到的東西。此處give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。18．（河南中考模擬）書面表達我們的國家日益強大，人民也變得富足因而有實力在國內(nèi)外旅游。但是近來一些中國人在國內(nèi)外的不文明行為屢屢發(fā)生并被曝光。我們的社會在呼喚文明的回歸，但是做到文明必須縣有禮貌。請以It’s Important to Be Polite 為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。要求?．語言表達準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3．80詞左右。It’s Important to Be Polite 【答案】It’s important to be polite to other people, whether we are at home or abroad. If other people are friendly and polite to us, we will feel happy. So other people will want us to be friendly and polite, too. On a plane, if a flight attendant gives us good service, we should express our thanks to her or him. If she or he is busy, we should wait for our turn to be served. If there is a queue waiting at the ticket office, we should join the queue instead of going to the front of it. In public places, we should obey the rules and not make other people feel upset. Anyway, if you want to receive smile, you should smile first. So always be polite, and our world will be full of sunshine.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文及命題作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。19．（湖北中考模擬）在“讓夢想照進現(xiàn)實”的主題班會上，同學(xué)們暢談了自己在初中的變化及種種經(jīng)歷。李浩也講述了自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷。假如你是李浩，請根據(jù)以下要點，用英語寫出李浩的發(fā)言稿。要點如下：，對英語沒什么興趣，上課很少舉手發(fā)言。，曾經(jīng)很沮喪，想放棄英語。，自己開始認真對待英語學(xué)習(xí)。，英語水平有較大的提高。（一兩點）注意：詞數(shù)60—80，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯： adv. 很少，不常 up 舉起Dear friends,I’m very glad to talk about my English study here 【答案】Dear friends,I’m very glad to talk about my English study here. My name is Li Jie. I used to be an extremely shy and introverted girl and was not interested in English. I seldom raised my hand in class. As a result, I often failed in English exams. I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English. It39。s you, my classmates, who helped me in time. So I began to take English learning seriously.Over the past two years, I think my English has improved a lot. I dreamed to study in an Englishspeaking country and I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country. I think my English will make great progress there.Thank you.【解析】【分析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be glad to do，talk about，used to be，be interested in，as a result，at the party，give up，dream to do等。文中I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English./It39。s you, my classmates, who helped me in time./I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country./I think my English will make great progress ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。20．（湖南中考模擬）書面表達假如你校英語社團即將舉辦為“My hobby” 的征文活動， 請你根據(jù)下面的提示問題寫一篇短文介紹你的愛好，然后參加此活