【正文】 般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。convenient 方便的；in one’s opinion按某人的觀點(diǎn)16．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們，三年的初中生活就要結(jié)束了，在我們的成長(zhǎng)過程中，既有快樂，也有煩惱。請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1．你在學(xué)?；蚣依镌?jīng)遇到的最大問題或煩惱；2．你解決問題或煩惱的過程；3．你的感想。要求： 1．詞數(shù)80～100，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名與人名。My middle school life is ing to an end .During the three years， ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My middle school life is ing to an end. During the three years，not only did I have happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was too much homework. Homework seemed endless for me. It made me stay up late and feel very tired every day，but I knew the teachers were expecting us to do better，even the best in my lessons.How can I deal with the problem？On the one hand，I concentrated more on my study in class. On the other hand，I did the homework as quickly as possible instead of being slow or absent minded. As a result，I spent less time on homework，and I wasn39。t frustrated any more.As we all know，practice makes perfect. Complaining or waiting can39。t help. Instead we should be active to face our problems.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞三年的初中生活展開敘述，寫作前首先要確定三年中遇到的最大問題或煩惱是什么，一件事情即可，然后圍繞這件事情展開敘述，三個(gè)寫作要點(diǎn)要面面俱到，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱，因?yàn)槲恼律婕暗膬?nèi)容是曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的事情，所以時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)來描述發(fā)，寫感想可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄 did the homework①as quickly as possible ②instead of being slow or absent ，而不是遲鈍或心不在焉。①as…as possible盡可能…②instead of 代替 而不是，后跟動(dòng)名詞?！靖叻志湫投緼s we know，practice makes perfect我們都知道，熟能生巧。practice makes perfect熟能生巧，諺語的運(yùn)用，為文章增添了色彩。17．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)近幾年來，越來越多的中國(guó)人出國(guó)旅游，但一些游客的不文明行為也成為國(guó)內(nèi)外輿論關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。直接影響著中國(guó)“禮儀之邦”之形象。新華旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”， 請(qǐng)以How to be a qualified tourist 為題目 寫一則英語短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā? 、保護(hù)環(huán)境，不隨地吐痰，不亂扔垃圾。 2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公眾場(chǎng)所喧嘩，購(gòu)物時(shí)排隊(duì)。 3 、保護(hù)文物古跡，不到處亂涂亂刻，不攀爬觸摸文物。4 、節(jié)約用水用電，用餐不浪費(fèi)。注意：1. 文章必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫； 2. 詞數(shù)80左右； 3. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 4. 參考詞匯：文物古跡cultural relics 文物artifactsHow to be a Qualified Tourist____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently, more and more Chinese people travel abroad , but some of them have bad manners .The poor behaviors or some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. How should we be a qualified tourist? In my opinion ,We have to understand and respect foreign cultures. First, we are supposed to protect the environment ,We shouldn’t spit or throw the rubbish everywhere. Second, we should obey the public order .We had better not shout loudly in public places , We have to wait in line when we are shopping .Third, we should protect the cultural relics. We mustn’t paint or carve on the monuments. We shouldn’t climb or touch artifacts. At the same time, we should save water and electricity. We are not supposed to waste food when we have meals . In this way, we39。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.【解析】寫作分析：這篇寫作需要圍繞“如何做一個(gè)合格的游客”展開寫作，具體的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出了。寫作的時(shí)候可以適當(dāng)借助祈使句來表示“不應(yīng)該做…”，需要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)姆绞揭胛恼?，銜接好每個(gè)要點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：開頭應(yīng)該對(duì)寫作的背景進(jìn)行一定的交代?！癰ad manners”表示禮貌狀況不好，然后講到了這些行為對(duì)中國(guó)的名聲有害（have done great harm to our good reputation），這里用到了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，表示傷害已經(jīng)造成了，產(chǎn)生了不好的影響，時(shí)態(tài)的妙用是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。緊接著發(fā)問引入主題。借助first, second等詞串聯(lián)起自己的觀點(diǎn)。相關(guān)短語使用恰當(dāng)，“are supposed to”（應(yīng)該…），“spit or throw the rubbish everywhere”（四處亂扔垃圾），“protect the cultural relics”（保護(hù)文化遺產(chǎn)），最后文章有簡(jiǎn)練的收尾，we39。ll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.（我們會(huì)為我們自己和我們的國(guó)家贏得尊重），簡(jiǎn)練，完成了寫作任務(wù)。18．（山西農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)附屬學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá)社會(huì)需要愛，時(shí)代呼喚愛。對(duì)善行、對(duì)愛心的感動(dòng)，存在于每個(gè)人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感動(dòng)，而是一種顯示感動(dòng)的勇氣。請(qǐng)為你身邊的人或事點(diǎn)贊，讓“點(diǎn)贊”成為傳遞正能量的一種行動(dòng)吧！是什么行為讓你點(diǎn)贊？講述一件你點(diǎn)贊的事情。你從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么？讓我們一起分享吧！請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示要點(diǎn)，寫一篇文章。注意：1．詞數(shù)：80左右；2．不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名及校名。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “l(fā)ike” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “l(fā)ike” buttonWhat could you learn from him/her? 【答案】I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，講述一件我點(diǎn)贊的事情，我從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我要點(diǎn)贊的人，接下來介紹他的情況，最后指出我從他身上學(xué)到的東西。此處give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。19．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校正在進(jìn)行課堂教學(xué)改革，經(jīng)過一段時(shí)間的適應(yīng)，同學(xué)們發(fā)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)在的課堂跟以前比較發(fā)生了一些變化，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示以“The Changes in Class”為題目，用英語寫一篇100詞左右