【正文】 al Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a World Heritage,the largest ancient palace in the all like think you will also like am looking forward to ing soon.Yours, Li Xin【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一封電子郵件給你的新外教Peter，向他介紹北京故宮博物院。給出的要點比較全面，只要稍加發(fā)揮想象即可。寫作時注意郵件的格式，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。要點內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作；在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要檢查主題是否明確，表達方式是否恰當，所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求，語法、拼寫、標點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。16．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達隨著黃石“創(chuàng)建文明城市活動”（簡稱“創(chuàng)文活動”）（“civilized city” campaign）的開展許多學(xué)校的師生走上街頭清理垃圾、小廣告,撿拾綠化帶中的垃圾,倡導(dǎo)文明出行,以飽滿熱情共赴“文明之約”,請你就此寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?nèi)容包括:,談?wù)勎沂小皠?chuàng)文活動”前后的情況（過去如何,現(xiàn)在如何）“創(chuàng)文活動”出力提兩點建議。作文要求::不得在作中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名.,記數(shù)80個左右。作文開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù).Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. And it has changed a lot. In the past, lots of rubbish could be seen around us. Thanks to the campaign, the streets look much cleaner now. What’s more, there used to be many people breaking the traffic rules. But now we can find more policemen in the streets who warn people to obey traffic rules and the traffic is no longer in a mess. As students we are supposed to follow the traffic rules strictly. Besides we can serve as volunteers to help clean the city. With everybody behaving well, our city will surely bee a civilized city. 【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于創(chuàng)建文明城市活動，要求談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā庸P前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。17．（湖北中考模擬）在“讓夢想照進現(xiàn)實”的主題班會上，同學(xué)們暢談了自己在初中的變化及種種經(jīng)歷。李浩也講述了自己英語學(xué)習的經(jīng)歷。假如你是李浩，請根據(jù)以下要點，用英語寫出李浩的發(fā)言稿。要點如下：，對英語沒什么興趣，上課很少舉手發(fā)言。，曾經(jīng)很沮喪，想放棄英語。，自己開始認真對待英語學(xué)習。，英語水平有較大的提高。（一兩點）注意：詞數(shù)60—80，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯： adv. 很少，不常 up 舉起Dear friends,I’m very glad to talk about my English study here 【答案】Dear friends,I’m very glad to talk about my English study here. My name is Li Jie. I used to be an extremely shy and introverted girl and was not interested in English. I seldom raised my hand in class. As a result, I often failed in English exams. I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English. It39。s you, my classmates, who helped me in time. So I began to take English learning seriously.Over the past two years, I think my English has improved a lot. I dreamed to study in an Englishspeaking country and I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country. I think my English will make great progress there.Thank you.【解析】【分析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如be glad to do，talk about，used to be，be interested in，as a result，at the party，give up，dream to do等。文中I was so depressed that I wanted to give up my English./It39。s you, my classmates, who helped me in time./I always wanted to visit America because it always seemed to me a very beautiful and friendly country./I think my English will make great progress ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學(xué)習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。18．（河北中考模擬）為了讓同學(xué)們認識到安全的重要性，網(wǎng)上進行了一項安全問題調(diào)查。以下是100名 學(xué)生傷亡的原因，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容用英語寫篇調(diào)查報告，就中學(xué)生應(yīng)當如何做好自我保 護這一問題談?wù)勀愕目捶?。要求?0詞左右。題目自擬，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。PercentageThe placeThe reason63%Streets or roadsCar accident18%Rivers or lakesSwimming without adults10%Food stalls （攤點）Unhealthy snacks9%School yardsInjury while playing or exercising____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Report on Children’s Injury and DeathRecently we did a survey among 100 students. They were injured or dead. The reasons are different. Here’s the result of our survey.Car accidents are the most dangerous. About 63 students were injured or died in the streets or on roads. And 18 students lost their lives in rivers or lakes while they were swimming without adults. 10 students were hurt because they had the unhealthy snacks at the little food stalls. 9 of them were injured in the school yard while playing or exercising.So we must pay more attention to road safety in daily life. Many rules should be made to reduce this kind of accidents. In one word, safety is a big problem. All of us should look out.After all, life is not a small matter.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。為了讓同學(xué)們認識到安全的重要性，網(wǎng)上對100名學(xué)生的傷亡原因進行了一項安全問題調(diào)查。要求根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示用英語寫篇調(diào)查報告，就中學(xué)生應(yīng)當如何做好自我保護這一問題談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。本文時態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；