【正文】 ass, what do you usually do?● What else do you need to do?We should build a harmonious class because ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是：你們學(xué)校英文報刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文，你來為?？陡澹勔徽勅绾蝿?chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。這是一篇開放性的作文，題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個提綱，具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來充實完成。因此首先我們要仔細(xì)思考這個問題，結(jié)合自己的真實生活，想一想平時是怎么做的，應(yīng)該怎么做。這是寫作中的一個難點。另外一個難點是使用正確的英語將自己的所想表達(dá)出來，英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，寫作時，不能逐詞去翻譯，而應(yīng)從文章、句子的整體考慮，首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時態(tài)來敘述；可能用到哪些詞匯、短語和句型，每個句子應(yīng)以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，然后再變化成較高級、復(fù)雜是句型，如復(fù)合句、非謂語動詞形式等。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述，符合題目要求。語法規(guī)范，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。文章中以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用復(fù)雜句型、短文和較高級的句型，提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。15．（河南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)你們學(xué)校的生活豐富多彩嗎？請以“Colorful weekdays”為題，介紹一下你們學(xué)校周一至周五（weekdays）都有哪些課外活動。要求：1. 語意連貫，層次清晰；2. 要有評價性描述；3. 詞數(shù)80左右?！敬鸢浮緾olorful weekdaysIt is my honor to show you our colorful activities and today I mainly tell you something about the part time activities in my school. Here is an introduction of my school’s part time activity. Our school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4：20 and end at 5：20 every day. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, and sports meeting and so on. Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival the most. Because the activities are wonderful.So I really hope that we can have less homework so we can have more time to participate in the part time activities to relax ourselves. Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in my school!【解析】話題作文寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。16．（廣東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是九年級一班的李新，你們的新外教Peter想去北京參觀故宮博物院，希望你能給他作一個大概的介紹。請根據(jù)以下要點提示，用英語給他發(fā)一封電子郵件。要點內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。寫作要求：80詞左右；條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標(biāo)點正確。Dear Peter, I’m Li ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Xin【答案】Dear Peter, I’m Li hear you are ing to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum .Let me introduce it to is also called Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well reserved imperial residence in China was built in 1406. It took 14 years to build the Forbidden City. The first ruler who actually lived here was Ming Emperor visitors from the world visit it every day. In 1987,the United Nations Educational,Scientific and Cultural Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a World Heritage,the largest ancient palace in the all like think you will also like am looking forward to ing soon.Yours, Li Xin【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一封電子郵件給你的新外教Peter，向他介紹北京故宮博物院。給出的要點比較全面，只要稍加發(fā)揮想象即可。寫作時注意郵件的格式，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一、第三人稱。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。要點內(nèi)容：（the Forbidden City）的基本情況（又名……； 建于14061420；古代皇帝emperor 寢宮；……）（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宮殿；……）。點睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作；在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當(dāng)運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要檢查主題是否明確，表達(dá)方式是否恰當(dāng)，所用時態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤等。17．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假設(shè)格林（Green） 先生是你班的一位外籍教師，在他回國前夕，學(xué)校將為他舉行歡送會。請用英文寫一篇歡送辭，內(nèi)容要點如下：1. 格林先生是澳大利亞人，三年前來到我校教英語；2. 他與我們相處融洽，但對我們要求嚴(yán)格；3. 這些年來，…… 我們深表感激；4. 下星期他將離?；貒?，祝他一路順風(fēng)。【答案】Ladies and Gentlemen,First of all, allow me to thank you for giving me a chance to speak here. Mr. Green is from Australia. He came to teach English in our school three years ago. He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us. All these years he39。s worked hard. He39。s tried his best to make his class lively and interesting. He39。s helped us a lot in our Englishi studies. We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help. All of us feel grateful to him. Next week Mr. Green will leave for Australia. Let39。s wish him a pleasant journey.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如Ladies and Gentlemen，first of all，thank you for doing，give me a chance，be from，three years ago，get along with，be strict with，try his best to do，leave for等。而He came to teach English in our school three years ago./He is easy to get along with, but he39。s strict with us./ We39。ve improved our spoken English with his help./ Next week Mr. Green will leave for ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。18．（四川中考模擬）（題文）書面表達(dá)課外活動可以讓我們增長知識，發(fā)展智力，開闊視野和塑造性格。許多學(xué)校創(chuàng)造性地開展了課外活動，如朗誦、唱歌、講故事、演話劇、辦刊物以及舉辦各種體育活動等。最近，某中學(xué)生英文報開設(shè)了“Afterclass Activities”的欄目。請你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動