【正文】 friend one year to translate them.During the process of translating the poems and working with my friend，I learned a lot aboutthe world around me and really got in touch with my soul. Furthermore，I think my English is betterthan it used to be. Most importantly，I learned the value of teamwork. My friend and I weredetermined to finish this huge task and that39。s exactly what we did. I feel so proud of my achievementand I hope I can publish my book soon.【解析】現(xiàn) 在 ，某 英 文 網(wǎng) 站 正 在 開 展 以 “成 就 ”為 主 題 的 征 文 活 動 ?假 如 你 是 李 華 ，請 用 英 語 寫 一篇 短 文 投 稿 ?談 一 談 你 經(jīng) 歷 的 讓 你 很 有 成 就 感 的 一 件 事 情 ，主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :你 取 得 了 什 么 成就 ，你 是 如 何 做 到 的 ，以 及 你 在 取 得 成 就 的 過 程 中 學(xué) 到 了 什 么 ?話題作文寫出的句子要達意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。 translate into 把翻譯成；in order to為了； used to do過去常常做某事17．（湖北中考模擬）書面表達隨著黃石“創(chuàng)建文明城市活動”（簡稱“創(chuàng)文活動”）（“civilized city” campaign）的開展許多學(xué)校的師生走上街頭清理垃圾、小廣告,撿拾綠化帶中的垃圾,倡導(dǎo)文明出行,以飽滿熱情共赴“文明之約”,請你就此寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶?。?nèi)容包括:,談?wù)勎沂小皠?chuàng)文活動”前后的情況（過去如何,現(xiàn)在如何）“創(chuàng)文活動”出力提兩點建議。作文要求::不得在作中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名.,記數(shù)80個左右。作文開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù).Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Our city has been on a “civilized city” campaign for over half a year. And it has changed a lot. In the past, lots of rubbish could be seen around us. Thanks to the campaign, the streets look much cleaner now. What’s more, there used to be many people breaking the traffic rules. But now we can find more policemen in the streets who warn people to obey traffic rules and the traffic is no longer in a mess. As students we are supposed to follow the traffic rules strictly. Besides we can serve as volunteers to help clean the city. With everybody behaving well, our city will surely bee a civilized city. 【解析】這是一篇關(guān)于創(chuàng)建文明城市活動，要求談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。18．（四川成都外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）Writing.In the past, most Chinese families have got one child in them. But recently, the government has relaxed the family planning policy, which means each couple are allowed to have two children. Would you like to have a brother or a sister who grows up together with you?Now please write a passage of about 80120 words to introduce your opinion. The following points should be included:1. Is it necessary for a family to have more than one child? Give at least two reasons for it.2. What’s the situation in your family? Are you the only child or not? List what makes you happy and unhappy.3. Give at least two suggestions to the families with two children.【答案】First of all, twochild policy is the gift for some only some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. Put aside the loneliness of their child, when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally, the burden on their child and his wife is unimaginable heavy. Their child and his wife have to take care of two old couples.In my family ,my parents have a only child. I also have some happy can enjoy some delicious food by myself. But I have no playmate in my family. Sometimes. I may feel lonely.If parents have two children, they can share the burden of taking care of their parents. It would be much better. Also, twochild policy can guarantee the number of Chinese population.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如first of all，grow up，grow older，marry with，burden on，have to do， take care of，by oneself，have no playmate，the number of等。而For some families. maybe the parents are only child and they can also have only child. / when their child grows up and they grow older, their child may marry with an only child girl accidentally,/ It would be much ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。19．（靖江外國語學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文?；厩闆r張陽，陽光中學(xué)九年級二班學(xué)生興趣愛好1. 喜歡閱讀。每周花七個多小時閱讀各種類型的書，因為……。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。優(yōu)秀事跡上個月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個人為保護環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。如：…….（舉1例）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫； 2）必須包括表格中所有的相關(guān)信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要