【正文】 ina and achieve the Chinese Dream． 【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學(xué)家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country。【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設(shè)美麗中國(guó)，實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)，農(nóng)民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學(xué)家怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了為了實(shí)現(xiàn)中國(guó)夢(mèng)，中國(guó)人正在努力做貢獻(xiàn)，接下來(lái)介紹農(nóng)民、醫(yī)生、警察和科學(xué)家如何做貢獻(xiàn)的，最后表示我們作為學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事。此處make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16．（全國(guó)中考模擬）每位同學(xué)都希望成為班級(jí)中受歡迎的人。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息,寫一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語(yǔ)短文,談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫龅?。?duì)待集體積極參加各項(xiàng)活動(dòng), 注重細(xì)節(jié),工作高標(biāo)準(zhǔn),……對(duì)待他人尊重老師、與同學(xué)相處融洽, 為別人保守秘密, ……對(duì)待自己嚴(yán)于律已，努力學(xué)習(xí)，不輕易放棄，謙虛有禮……要求：1．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Being a Popular StudentWe all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【答案】We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. I think I can take an active part in all kinds of activities. It’s necessary to pay attention to every detail, because a miss is as good as a mile. I’m so well organized that I always work to high standard. I think I should respect our teachers, it’s also important to get along well with my classmates. What’s more, I always help others when they are in trouble. I not only （would） keep secrets for others but also never say bad words about others.I’m always strict with myself in everything. I always try my best to study, I never give up easily. I’m modest and easy to work with. I often help my classmates who has trouble in studying. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【解析】 這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。be popular with sb受某人歡迎；take an active part in積極參加；keep secrets保守秘密； give up easily. 輕易放棄；17．（南通市通州區(qū)金北學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá) 陽(yáng)光中學(xué)為了豐富學(xué)生的課余生活，每學(xué)期都會(huì)舉辦各種各樣的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，為校報(bào)寫一篇有關(guān)的報(bào)道。活動(dòng)內(nèi)容籃球比賽強(qiáng)身健體, 團(tuán)隊(duì)精神航模制作了解科學(xué), 培養(yǎng)興趣英語(yǔ)演講練習(xí)口語(yǔ), 提高能力…………你的觀點(diǎn)……（請(qǐng)自擬至少兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）注意：1. 必須包含所給要點(diǎn), 省略號(hào)部分適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯；2. 詞數(shù)90左右, 開頭已寫好, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3. 表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________【答案】In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.If you are a sports fan, you can join in the basketball games. It can not only make you strong and healthy but also help you learn teamwork. For those who are interested in science, model making is a good choice. Students get to know more about science and develop interest in it. If you want to practice your spoken English, you can’t miss the English speeches. It can improve your abilities as well. There is also an art festival. Those who are good at singing and dancing can take an active part in it. You can show your talents and bee more confident.In my opinion, taking part in those activities helps us reduce our stress of study and every student enjoys a colourful school life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹學(xué)校在業(yè)余時(shí)間舉辦的各種各樣的活動(dòng)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第二，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如there are……，If you are……，It can not only……，It can improve……，Those who are……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我們有各種活動(dòng)可以選擇，接下來(lái)介紹各種活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容，最后表達(dá)參加各種活動(dòng)的意義。此處all kinds of, choose from, join in, be interested in, know more about, want to do sth, be good at, take an active part in, help sb do sth等這些