【正文】 ina and achieve the Chinese Dream． 【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country?！窘馕觥窟@是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設美麗中國，實現中國夢，農民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學家怎樣做貢獻的。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了為了實現中國夢，中國人正在努力做貢獻，接下來介紹農民、醫(yī)生、警察和科學家如何做貢獻的，最后表示我們作為學生應該做的事。此處make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。16．（全國中考模擬）每位同學都希望成為班級中受歡迎的人。請你根據下表所提供的信息,寫一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語短文,談談你是如何做的。對待集體積極參加各項活動, 注重細節(jié),工作高標準,……對待他人尊重老師、與同學相處融洽, 為別人保守秘密, ……對待自己嚴于律已，努力學習，不輕易放棄，謙虛有禮……要求：1．詞數100左右。開頭及結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。2．所寫內容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當的發(fā)揮。3．不得出現真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。Being a Popular StudentWe all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【答案】We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. I think I can take an active part in all kinds of activities. It’s necessary to pay attention to every detail, because a miss is as good as a mile. I’m so well organized that I always work to high standard. I think I should respect our teachers, it’s also important to get along well with my classmates. What’s more, I always help others when they are in trouble. I not only （would） keep secrets for others but also never say bad words about others.I’m always strict with myself in everything. I always try my best to study, I never give up easily. I’m modest and easy to work with. I often help my classmates who has trouble in studying. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【解析】 這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱，一般現在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。be popular with sb受某人歡迎；take an active part in積極參加；keep secrets保守秘密； give up easily. 輕易放棄；17．（南通市通州區(qū)金北學校中考模擬）書面表達 陽光中學為了豐富學生的課余生活，每學期都會舉辦各種各樣的活動。請根據提示，為校報寫一篇有關的報道?；顒觾热莼@球比賽強身健體, 團隊精神航模制作了解科學, 培養(yǎng)興趣英語演講練習口語, 提高能力…………你的觀點……（請自擬至少兩點內容）注意：1. 必須包含所給要點, 省略號部分適當發(fā)揮, 不要簡單翻譯；2. 詞數90左右, 開頭已寫好, 不計入總詞數；3. 表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________【答案】In order to make our school life more colourful, there are all kinds of activities for us to choose from every term.If you are a sports fan, you can join in the basketball games. It can not only make you strong and healthy but also help you learn teamwork. For those who are interested in science, model making is a good choice. Students get to know more about science and develop interest in it. If you want to practice your spoken English, you can’t miss the English speeches. It can improve your abilities as well. There is also an art festival. Those who are good at singing and dancing can take an active part in it. You can show your talents and bee more confident.In my opinion, taking part in those activities helps us reduce our stress of study and every student enjoys a colourful school life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹學校在業(yè)余時間舉辦的各種各樣的活動。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時，人稱為第二，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如there are……，If you are……，It can not only……，It can improve……，Those who are……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們有各種活動可以選擇，接下來介紹各種活動的內容，最后表達參加各種活動的意義。此處all kinds of, choose from, join in, be interested in, know more about, want to do sth, be good at, take an active part in, help sb do sth等這些