【正文】 一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如not only...but also..., one of+the 形容詞最高級+名詞復數(shù), be interested in, be good at, develop a good habit, pay attention to以及from now on等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關(guān)鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。15．（重慶中考模擬）書面表達。英國懷特學校下學期組織學生來你校學習了解中國文化，請你以李明的身份給該校校長Mr. Green寫一封郵件，介紹你校的相關(guān)活動安排及其理由。要求：1. 介紹不少于兩個有關(guān)中國文化的活動及安排理由；2. 詞數(shù)：80－120詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。參考要點：（打乒乓、包餃子……）2. 安排理由（非常流行、帶來好運……）3. …….Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to your ing.Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【答案】Dear Mr. Green,I’m glad that you’ll e to our school for a visit next term． Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China，we arrange a pingpong game for the students．They can learn from each other. What’s more，they’ll have a chance to make and taste the traditional Chinese food．All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner．In our culture，dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck．I think they will enjoy their time here． I’m looking forward to your ing．Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】這篇作文要求我們以李明的身份給英國懷特學校的校長Green 先生寫一封信，介紹他們學校的學生來你校參觀時的活動安排以及理由。通過審題可知，這篇作文的主要內(nèi)容有以下幾個方面：首先介紹不少于兩個關(guān)于中國文化的活動，如打乒乓球、包餃子等；然后敘述安排這樣的活動的理由。根據(jù)表達要點充實寫作內(nèi)容，使文意完整。整篇作文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，根據(jù)表達的需要使用適當?shù)娜朔Q，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時，應(yīng)注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型。句式表達以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，穿插復合句，如賓語從句、定語從句等，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫，表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。短文內(nèi)容完整，符合題目要求。短文主要分三段，第一段對懷特學校學生們的到來表示歡迎（題目給出），然后作者一句話引出了文章的主題，Now I’ll introduce something about the activities and the meanings of them．。第二段是文章的主體部分，這一段中介紹了學校的活動安排：打乒乓球和包餃子，并闡述了安排這些活動的理由。這一段占篇幅最大，里面使用了較豐富的句式，如Since pingpong is popular in both Britain and China, we arrange a pingpong game for the students中Since引導原因狀語從句；All the students will work together to make dumplings and have a big dinner中動詞不定式作目的狀語；In our culture, dumplings are not only a kind of delicious food but also a symbol of good luck中使用了not only…but also...句式。最后一段作者用一句話表達了自己的期望。整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理、層次清晰，語句表達準確，意思連貫。16．（全國中考模擬）每位同學都希望成為班級中受歡迎的人。請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息,寫一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語短文,談?wù)勀闶侨绾巫龅?。對待集體積極參加各項活動, 注重細節(jié),工作高標準,……對待他人尊重老師、與同學相處融洽, 為別人保守秘密, ……對待自己嚴于律已，努力學習，不輕易放棄，謙虛有禮……要求：1．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3．不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Being a Popular StudentWe all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【答案】We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. I think I can take an active part in all kinds of activities. It’s necessary to pay attention to every detail, because a miss is as good as a mile. I’m so well organized that I always work to high standard. I think I should respect our teachers, it’s also important to get along well with my classmates. What’s more, I always help others when they are in trouble. I not only （would） keep secrets for others but also never say bad words about others.I’m always strict with myself in everything. I always try my best to study, I never give up easily. I’m modest and easy to work with. I often help my classmates who has trouble in studying. All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers es to those who keep improving their personal qualities.【解析】 這是一篇圖表，要求介紹自己。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。be popular with sb受某人歡迎；take an active part in積極參加；keep secrets保守秘密； give up easily. 輕易放棄；17．（湖南省岳陽開發(fā)區(qū)長嶺中學中考模擬）書面表達。現(xiàn)在提倡全民閱讀，某英語網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以”reading”為題的英語征文活動。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語短文，向該網(wǎng)站投稿。提示：？？？要求：80詞左右，可適當發(fā)揮。Reading ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Reading plays an important role in our life. It’s a good way to relax. At the same time, it can also help us open our minds. So as middle school students, we should read more. In my opinion, textbooks, newspapers and magazines are all good reading materials. As for me, I plan to read one book every month. Whenever I have free time, I’ll read. As the saying goes, reading makes a full man. Let’s start reading now.【解析】寫作分析：本文需要按照要求以“閱讀”為主題寫作，要寫出讀書的好處、中學生可以讀的書、你的讀書計劃。按照要求逐條描述即可，但要注意增添相關(guān)細節(jié)使得文章連貫。寫作亮點：總起要對reading做一個概括，用到了“plays an important role”（扮演重要的角色）這一搭配，關(guān)于