【正文】 ee……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了為了實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢(mèng)，中國人正在努力做貢獻(xiàn)，接下來介紹農(nóng)民、醫(yī)生、警察和科學(xué)家如何做貢獻(xiàn)的，最后表示我們作為學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事。此處make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。14．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校打算舉辦一場(chǎng)以“感恩老師”為主題的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給你的美國筆友Mike 寫一封郵件，介紹這次的活動(dòng)。時(shí)間：5月30號(hào)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容： 1. 給老師獻(xiàn)花致敬；2. 把寫滿感謝祝福話語的卡片貼在墻上；3. 為老師表演節(jié)目（put on performances）你的感觸：……注意： 1. 詞數(shù)80100；2． 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in will put up the thanknotes on the that we put on performances for our teachers.What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹以“感恩老師”為主題的活動(dòng)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Our school will hold……，On the day we will……，We thank them for……，I am……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我們學(xué)校舉行了一個(gè)感恩老師的活動(dòng)，接下來介紹我們的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，最后表達(dá)我的感觸。此處give sth to sb, thank sb for doing sth, be in trouble, put up, put on, look forward to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。15．（云南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)I’d Like to Say “ ” to My 提示：即將畢業(yè)了，在你三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，你有什么想要對(duì)家長(zhǎng)、老師或者朋友說？有歉意、有感謝，有懷念還是其它？請(qǐng)以 I’d Like to Say “ ” to My 為題，任選一位傾訴對(duì)象，用英語寫一篇文章，談一談你的想法。要求：、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；3. 請(qǐng)將短文寫在答題卡上。寫在本試題卷上無效?！敬鸢浮縄’d Like to Say “Sorry” to My TeacherHow time flies! I will graduate in a few months. I always feel sorry for one thing in my heart. I’d like to say sorry to my English teacher, Mrs. Chen.When I began to learn English, I hated remembering new words. So I wasn’t good at English. Once I copied my deskmate’s paper during an English exam and handed it in. I got an “A”. Mrs. Chen didn’t know the truth and praised me in class. Now I still remember her words clearly, “ It’s a good beginning. I believe you will be better and better.” When I heard these words, I really felt regretful in my heart. I decided to tell Mrs. Chen the truth and say “sorry” to her after class. But I didn’t.Since then, I have tried my best to learn English well. And my English is being better and better. But I’d like to say sincerely. “ Sorry, Mrs. Chen.”【解析】這是一篇要求介紹你三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)和生活。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。16．（海南中考模擬）書面表達(dá)年1月以來，瓊海市開始推廣使用共享單車，你對(duì)這一舉措有什么看法？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的表格提示內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，談?wù)劰蚕韱诬嚨睦准笆褂霉蚕韱诬嚨慕ㄗh，以便在英語課上與同學(xué)們交流。shared bikesadvantages: save energy, air pollutiondisadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidentssuggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, don’t bring home要求：1. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2. 必須包含所給提示，但不要逐字翻譯，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù)80左右。（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think … What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。17．（長(zhǎng)沙麓山國際實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校中考模擬）書面表達(dá) 75. 初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請(qǐng)你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想要求：（1）應(yīng)包含以上全部的信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；（2）詞數(shù)：80字左右（3）短文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________