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這是一篇給材料作文,要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱(chēng)主要用第一、第三人稱(chēng)。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。9.上周,你們班就初中生能否騎電動(dòng)自行車(chē)上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論?,F(xiàn)在,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇介紹討論情況的短文。注意:;,書(shū)寫(xiě)工整、規(guī)范;。生詞提示:electric 討論結(jié)果25人表示同意35人不同意理由;。,騎電動(dòng)車(chē)不安全;,騎電動(dòng)車(chē)也快不起來(lái)?!敬鸢浮縇ast week, our class had a discussion about whether junior students could ride electric bicycles to go to students of our class agreed with it, because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn’t agree with them. They said it was not safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles, for they were too young. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】試題分析:本題要求以初中生能否騎電動(dòng)自行車(chē)上學(xué)進(jìn)行了一次討論。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇80100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文,而且要做到表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)可知,本文主要以一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)書(shū)寫(xiě)。要注意把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來(lái),不要遺漏任何一個(gè),書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)一定注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。觀點(diǎn)分明,談及理由按照要求至少要各寫(xiě)兩點(diǎn)。并注意上下文要語(yǔ)句貫通。并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):短文中作者按照題目的要求,給我們介紹了持不同觀點(diǎn)的學(xué)生各自的理由,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,要點(diǎn)全面。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確,書(shū)寫(xiě)工整規(guī)范。該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school. They also said in the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn’t ride electric bicycles ,理由也很充分??键c(diǎn):提綱類(lèi)作文。10.中央電視臺(tái)《經(jīng)典詠流傳》節(jié)目的播出,再次激發(fā)了人們對(duì)經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品的閱讀熱情。讀書(shū)可以成就更美好的自己,讓讀書(shū)伴隨我們成長(zhǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示,以“Growing up with Reading”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文介紹你曾經(jīng)讀過(guò)的一本書(shū)或—首詩(shī),并建議大家多讀書(shū),讀好書(shū)。要點(diǎn)提示:讀書(shū)的重要性1. 獲取知識(shí),開(kāi)闊眼界;2. 提升自我,增強(qiáng)自信……讀過(guò)的一本書(shū)或一首詩(shī)1. 作品內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介;2. 讀書(shū)感悟及對(duì)自己的影響。多讀書(shū),讀好書(shū)1. 利用閑暇時(shí)間多讀書(shū),養(yǎng)成讀書(shū)的好習(xí)慣;2. 多讀經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品……注意:1. 短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫。2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校及地名。3. 詞數(shù):80100(文章開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯:classic 經(jīng)典作品; open up one’s eyes 開(kāi)闊眼界;improve oneself 提升自我; be more confident 更自信;responsibility 責(zé)任;cooperation 合作。Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. 【答案】Growing up with ReadingHave you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV? This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . Our study can be improved if we read more good books.These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book39。s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story. Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was selfconfident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.【解析】這是一篇圖表,要求介紹自己讀過(guò)的一本書(shū)。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái),在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一,三人稱(chēng),一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題,不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語(yǔ)意連貫。