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makes perfect. Wish you success. Thank you for listening.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,為初一初二的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們做聽說機(jī)考的經(jīng)驗(yàn)介紹。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,人稱為第一,二人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I’m glad that……,I think……,If you want to……,you’d better……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了我對英語聽說機(jī)考的認(rèn)識,接下來介紹你們在考試中需要做什么,最后給出一些建議。此處share sth with sb, need to do sth, take notes, want to do sth, at the same time, pay attention to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16.(四川中考模擬)書面表達(dá)在中國歷史上,書籍一直傳承著人類的文明。然而隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展,國民尤其是青少年對網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的癡迷,使得閱讀漸漸地退出中學(xué)生的生活。就“如何在學(xué)生中開展閱讀活動”, 請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語小短文。提示:。:①在圖書館閱讀。 ②在班級建立圖書角。③同學(xué)間互借。 ④計劃閱讀時間及閱讀量。…….要求:(1)詞數(shù):80詞左右。(2)字跡工整,語言流暢,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,邏輯清晰。(3)文章內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。How to Have Reading Activities______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How to Have Reading ActivitiesAs we all know, it is important for us to read books. It not only makes us know about the world but also helps us relax ourselves. I have some good advice about how to have reading activities.First, we can read in our school library. There are all kinds of books there. It39。s a good place to read. Second, we can set up a reading corner in order to read at any time after class. Third, we can exchange books with one another. It helps develop our cooperation spirit. At last,it39。s necessary to plan reading time and the number of reading books.All in all, we can benefit from colorful reading activities.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,主要內(nèi)容是圍繞由于受到互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的影響,青少年對閱讀漸漸失去興趣這一現(xiàn)象,就如何在學(xué)生中開展閱讀活動,寫一篇英語小短文。結(jié)合所給的材料可知時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱主要為第一人稱輔以第三人稱。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象,注意要理順要點(diǎn),防止漏寫。在寫作的時候,注意緊扣主題,連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。提示要點(diǎn):。:①在圖書館閱讀。 ②在班級建立圖書角。③同學(xué)間互借。 ④計劃閱讀時間及閱讀量。…….17.(四川中考模擬)書面表達(dá)目前,學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重,請圍繞以下要點(diǎn)談?wù)勂渲性蛞约皞€人建議。原因: 看法與建議:; ,學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮; 。 要求: 80100; ; ,不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)。________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hardworking and they don39。t work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven39。t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.【解析】寫作分析:本文需要就考試作弊這一主題展開討論。具體需要圍繞考試作弊的原因展開寫作,原因已經(jīng)給出來了,有以下幾點(diǎn): 。寫完原因后還要提出自己的看法和建議,具體內(nèi)容也已給出:;,學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮;。寫作內(nèi)容上難度不大,需要把更多精力放在語言的準(zhǔn)確性和文章的連貫性上面。寫作亮點(diǎn):第一段總起描述了現(xiàn)在存在的作弊現(xiàn)象,用到了一些較好的短語,如picked up a bad habit(養(yǎng)成了一個壞習(xí)慣)。第二段對原因進(jìn)行了闡述,借助了first,second,third等詞使得原因的陳述連貫起來。一些短語運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確,如waste a lot of time playing games(浪費(fèi)時間在玩游戲上),prepare for the exams(準(zhǔn)備考試)。最后一段闡明了自己的看法(In my opinion),句式上面有創(chuàng)新,用到了一處倒裝句(only in this way can we improve our study and make progress),強(qiáng)調(diào)了不能作弊,只有以誠實(shí)和勤奮的方式我們才能進(jìn)步??傮w來說文章寫作較為流暢,有許多亮點(diǎn)。18.(山西中考模擬) 書面表達(dá)請將短文寫在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。一直以來,同學(xué)們對作業(yè)持有不同的觀點(diǎn)。在你班的主題班會上,同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了“Is daily homework necessary?”的討論,請你根據(jù)提示和要求,并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn),發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned;Practice makes prefect;...Take up too much time;Make us less interested in studying;...Your opinion:要求:1.80詞以上。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名?!敬鸢浮緿ear students,I39。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”.In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。t be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.That39。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析:審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文,討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點(diǎn),其次結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn),發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作過程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確,注意正確使用連詞,借助實(shí)例、實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)來佐證自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn):首先用一個自然段來闡明寫作的主題,表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)(認(rèn)為作業(yè)是很必要的),可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。其次,開始具體陳述觀點(diǎn),陳述的時候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例,相關(guān)用到的短語有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時候有困難,review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識,think over the difficulties來回思考難點(diǎn),Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少,例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語。最后可以用說理的方式來介紹做作業(yè)的必要性,例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能,在這里也有一點(diǎn)亮點(diǎn),就是說作業(yè)也要有變化性,要豐富多彩,體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考,總體來說出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。19.(江蘇中考模擬)寫作81. 春天,許多人都喜歡參加各種戶外活動。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然,某中學(xué)生英文報舉辦了一次征文活動,請你根據(jù)以下問題,用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。提示:1)What’s the benefit (好處) of outdoor activities? (12 opinions)2)Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? (12 examples)3)What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? (At least 1 suggestion)要求:1)表達(dá)清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;2)必須包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3)詞數(shù):100詞左右,開頭已給出,不計入詞數(shù);4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.