【正文】 famous star. In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As students, we should learn from them. Only in this way can we bee useful persons in the future.【解析】【詳解】寫作思路：根據(jù)所給提示可知，本篇作文可以分三步進(jìn)行，首先分別列舉正反雙方的觀點(diǎn)，然后擺出自己的看法，并總結(jié)作為青少年的我們應(yīng)該怎么做。列舉觀點(diǎn)時(shí)要思路清晰，具有條理性。本篇作文，首先以Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university ，接著Some people think….When they are sad, .... Also,…列出一些人贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由，中間用到when以及also 這樣的詞使表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，且具有連貫性。However, others think…用however轉(zhuǎn)折之后接著列出不贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由。然后In my opinion….巧妙運(yùn)用過渡語，列出自己的觀點(diǎn)。 We should….針對我們青少年應(yīng)該怎么做，給出自己的建議。總結(jié)流暢自然，渾然天成。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá) Hey Li Ming,I will move to your munity and stay for two months. I want to know something about your munity. What is your munity like? What activities do you usually have? How can I get along with your neighbors?Write soon!Yours,Ben假如你是Li Ming，請用英語給筆友Ben回復(fù)郵件。注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；，郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Ben,I’m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. Yours, Li Ming【答案】Dear Ben,I’ m very glad to know that you will e to our munity. My munity is in the northern part of the city. It’s not a big one, but it’s quite beautiful. You can see a garden with different flowers when entering it. You can breathe fresh air every morning because of many trees in it.Besides, we also have different activities. For example, people in Helping Hand Club always do some shopping for the old who live alone. Every weekend, college students always help us with our homework.All the people in our munity are kind and easy to get on with. You’d better say “Hello” to greet them. If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.That’s all about our munity. I hope you will have a good time here.Yours, Li Ming【解析】試題分析：本文是要求寫一封電子郵件，寫作時(shí)注意要寫信的格式。假如你是Li Ming，請用英語給筆友Ben回復(fù)郵件。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀電子郵件，寫作時(shí)需回答郵件內(nèi)所提問題，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。仔細(xì)閱讀本的電子郵件，找出他的問題（我想了解一下你們社區(qū)的情況。你的社區(qū)是什么樣的？你通常有什么活動(dòng)？我怎樣和你的鄰居相處？），然后根據(jù)問題做出回答。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)，列好提綱，注意使用連詞，句型、句式，使文章整體意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫，語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致等）。（一）列提綱：1. 社區(qū)是什么樣的in the northern part of the city/ big but quite beautiful/ a garden with different flowers. 2. 活動(dòng)do some shopping for the old who live alone/ college students always help us with our . 怎樣和鄰居相處kind and easy to get on with./“Hello” to greet them. /If you bump into someone, it will be polite to say “sorry”.（二）根據(jù)提綱連詞成句，然后連句成篇，注意連詞的使用。（三）寫完以后，在閱讀一遍，檢查單詞拼寫，語法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語序，大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號，主謂一致等是否有錯(cuò)誤。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。（2）注意給出的起始句（這就給出了時(shí)態(tài)），學(xué)生運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)，及需要的重要短語或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語，句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。 （4）注意書寫的規(guī)范：大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等的正確運(yùn)用。 （5）注意檢查：單詞拼寫，語法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語序，主謂一致等。16．（山東中考模擬）書面表達(dá)?，F(xiàn)在各行各業(yè)都在為建設(shè)美麗中國，實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢而奮斗．請根據(jù)下列圖示，談?wù)勔韵聨追N職業(yè)怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的．作為學(xué)生，你又該怎么辦？要求：短文需包含提示要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；語句通順，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，書寫規(guī)范；詞數(shù)：80詞左右．短文開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream． 【答案】Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．Besides，they also take good care of the old．（醫(yī)生）In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．（警察）As for scientists，they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．（科學(xué)家）As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country。【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹為建設(shè)美麗中國，實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢，農(nóng)民，醫(yī)生，警察和科學(xué)家怎樣做貢獻(xiàn)的。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Now all the Chinese people are……，they are busy……，we can see……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了為了實(shí)現(xiàn)中國夢，中國人正在努力做貢獻(xiàn)，接下來介紹農(nóng)民、醫(yī)生、警察和科學(xué)家如何做貢獻(xiàn)的，最后表示我們作為學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事。此處make efforts to do sth, a large number of, be busy doing sth. try one’s best, take good care of, concentrate on, make contributions to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。17．（安徽中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校打算舉辦一場以“感恩老師”為主題的活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，給你的美國筆友Mike 寫一封郵件，介紹這次的活動(dòng)。時(shí)間：5月30號活動(dòng)內(nèi)容： 1. 給老師獻(xiàn)花致敬；2. 把寫滿感謝祝福話語的卡片貼在墻上；3. 為老師表演節(jié)目（put on performances）你的感觸：……注意： 1. 詞數(shù)80100；2． 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；4. 開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mike,Our school will hold an activity to express our thanks and love to the teachers on May 30. On the day we will give our teachers some flowers to show our thanks and respect. We thank them for helping us when we are in will put up the thanknotes on the that we put on performances for our teachers.What do you usually do to thank your teachers? I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹以“感恩老師”為主題的活動(dòng)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Our school will hold……，On the day we will……，We thank them for……，I am……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我們學(xué)校舉行了一個(gè)感恩老師的活動(dòng)，接下來介紹我們的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，最后表達(dá)我的感觸。此處give sth to sb, thank sb for doin