【正文】 __【答案】We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.As a member of the class, I respect and trust my teachers and classmates. When I have someproblems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. When some of my classmates are sad,I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.Of course, there is more that I should do. I’m really good at English, but some of myclassmates aren’t. I will help them. Then we’ll make progress together.【解析】這篇作文給出的寫作背景是：你們學(xué)校英文報刊在以Building a Harmonious Class為題征文，你來為?？陡?，談一談如何創(chuàng)建一個和諧的班集體、你通常是怎么做的以及你還需要做什么。這是一篇開放性的作文，題目中只給出了話題和大概的一個提綱，具體的寫作內(nèi)容需要我們自己思考，發(fā)揮想象力來充實(shí)完成。因此首先我們要仔細(xì)思考這個問題，結(jié)合自己的真實(shí)生活，想一想平時是怎么做的，應(yīng)該怎么做。這是寫作中的一個難點(diǎn)。另外一個難點(diǎn)是使用正確的英語將自己的所想表達(dá)出來，英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，寫作時，不能逐詞去翻譯，而應(yīng)從文章、句子的整體考慮，首先確定這篇短文使用什么人稱、時態(tài)來敘述；可能用到哪些詞匯、短語和句型，每個句子應(yīng)以簡單句為基礎(chǔ)，如主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，然后再變化成較高級、復(fù)雜是句型，如復(fù)合句、非謂語動詞形式等。另外還應(yīng)注意語句之間的連接，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞或副詞，使文意銜接緊密、意思連貫。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整、充實(shí)。作者根據(jù)題目要求就如何創(chuàng)建和諧班級發(fā)表了自己的看法。短文中作者結(jié)合了自己日常生活中的所作所為，使文章的內(nèi)容非常真實(shí)。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章中以第一人稱為主、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來敘述，符合題目要求。語法規(guī)范，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣。文章中以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，調(diào)整文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用復(fù)雜句型、短文和較高級的句型，提升了文章的檔次。這些較好的句型和短語有We should build a harmonious class, because it’s important for us to grow up happily.、When I have some problems, I always talk to them and listen to their advice. 、When some of my classmates are sad, I’m always ready to give a hand and cheer them up.、I’m really good at English, but some of my classmates aren’t. I will help 。15．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你校正開展“How to be safe on the Internet”的大討論活動，請你結(jié)合生活實(shí)際寫一封英語小短文介紹有關(guān)情況，以幫助他人安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)。短文內(nèi)容包括以下幾個方面：網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幾條規(guī)則。如，和家長有所約定，不向strangers透露（give out）真實(shí)的個人信息，不單獨(dú)和net friend見面，使用文明語言，等等。希望……要求：詞數(shù)不少于100。 信中須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使語句通順，意思連貫，符合邏輯。 文章中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。At present, most of us have Internet or Wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, most of us have net or wifi at school and at home. It is time for us to talk about how to use the Internet. We can get useful knowledge and information through it. We can also get relaxed in our free time. But some of us are not using it in a good way, such as being crazy about playing games.Here are some rules to make us safe and have fun on the Internet. First, we should make rules for Internet use with our parents. Second, we mustn’t give out our real personal information to strangers. Third, we can never meet anyone we meet on line alone. And it’s impolite of us to say bad words about others. I hope everyone uses the Internet in a proper and polite way. If so, the Internet will be safe and useful for us.【解析】試題分析：本篇作文是一篇小議論文，主要討論如何正確使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的方式。寫作中學(xué)生需要緊密貼合題干中已經(jīng)給出的要點(diǎn)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊，利弊都要寫出。介紹如何安全、文明地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的幾條規(guī)則。題干中給出了例子，如，和家長有所約定，不向陌生人透露真實(shí)的個人信息，不單獨(dú)和網(wǎng)友見面，使用文明語言，等等。學(xué)生可以在這個基礎(chǔ)上整理自己的語言，羅列出規(guī)則，可以借助實(shí)用的祈使句結(jié)構(gòu)。最后收尾要寫出自己的希望。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢，首先完整介紹了網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的利弊。如：利：get useful knowledge and information，get relaxed，弊：being crazy about playing games。第二段介紹了幾條規(guī)則，恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用“we should”，“we mustn’t”，“it’s impolite of us to…”等句型。最后結(jié)尾提出了倡議，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，段落清晰。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)追星是青少年中普遍存在的問題。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，同時說明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。贊同，學(xué)習(xí)他們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，嚴(yán)格要求自己。，想到偶像會很開心。不贊同，浪費(fèi)時間、金錢和精力。，整天夢想成為明星。你的觀點(diǎn)…… （發(fā)揮12點(diǎn)）注意：1. 詞數(shù)90左右。短文開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 條理清晰，語義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。3. 短文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。4. 以…為榜樣： follow a good example of sb. 面對現(xiàn)實(shí): face realityNowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university people think teenagers should learn from stars and find their strengths and then they are strict with they are sad,it is fun to think ,they forget the pressure of learning.However, others think it is a waste of time and energy to chase stars. And it also affects their studies. They can’t face the reality and always dreams of being a famous star. In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As students, we should learn from them. Only in this way can we bee useful persons in the future.【解析】【詳解】寫作思路：根據(jù)所給提示可知，本篇作文可以分三步進(jìn)行，首先分別列舉正反雙方的觀點(diǎn)，然后擺出自己的看法，并總結(jié)作為青少年的我們應(yīng)該怎么做。列舉觀點(diǎn)時要思路清晰，具有條理性。本篇作文，首先以Nowadays, lots of students bee star chasers. especially many university ，接著Some people think….When they are sad, .... Also,…列出一些人贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由，中間用到when以及also 這樣的詞使表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，且具有連貫性。However, others think…用however轉(zhuǎn)折之后接著列出不贊同的觀點(diǎn)及理由。然后In my opinion….巧妙運(yùn)用過渡語，列出自己的觀點(diǎn)。 We should….針對我們青少年應(yīng)該怎么做，給出自己的建議。總結(jié)流暢自然，渾然天成。17．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達(dá)假如你的筆友 John 將作為交換生在中國家庭生活一周，他寫了一封 注意：；，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 80 左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear John,向你求助。請根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容寫封回信。Dear Li Hua,I will e to Nanjing in July and stay with a Chinese family for a week as an exchange student. To get along well with my host family, should I prepare any gifts? How can I help with the housework? What else should I do?Please write back soon.Yours, JohnDear John,I’m gla