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語從句等;然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9.中學(xué)生在成長過程中經(jīng)常會碰到一些煩惱。假設(shè)你是李華,請根據(jù)下表提示,用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇?。你的煩惱你的做法個頭不高,相貌平常不必在意,相信自己父母不理解,朋友少學(xué)會溝通,友善待人學(xué)習(xí)壓力大,課外活動少……(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn))要求:1. 詞數(shù)100左右,開頭及結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Hello everyone,Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Hello everyone,I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.I am not very tall and very mon. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.My parents don’t understand me and I have very few friends. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to municate with others very well.I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the afterclass activities. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】試題分析:本題是一篇給材料作文,要求用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇āR髲膫€人外貌特點(diǎn)、與人溝通及學(xué)習(xí)壓力等方面進(jìn)行寫作。要包含表格中所有的信息,并作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。短文用第一人稱形式,一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文開頭直奔主題:我想要談?wù)勎业臒兰霸鯓犹幚硭麄?;后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學(xué)習(xí)上的壓力幾方面分別談?wù)撟约旱臒兰疤幚淼姆绞?,生動具體,條理分明。文中的不定式作賓補(bǔ)、作定語、作賓語用得準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng);and連接的并列句、并列謂語等等都使短文顯得簡捷生動。【考點(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。10.書面表達(dá)?!癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)(結(jié)果見下表)。請據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論,并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會計劃未來……(至少兩條)注意:(1)短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);(2)你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條;(3)詞數(shù):80—100;(4)短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:尊重respect短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析:英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論,寫出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn),所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時,敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱,敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法,不能是漢語式的句子,要使用一些高級詞匯及句式。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語和句式,如:do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查;respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母;look after照顧;make a good plan for sth為某事做一個好的計劃;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語從句,如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ,也是提分的經(jīng)典句子??键c(diǎn):材料作文。