【正文】 ink as students we should do something to help protect our environment. We should save water. And we should turn off lights when we leave the classroom.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書(shū)后的很大變化。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It is our duty to……，I went to……，And I used to……，And I try to……，I think……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的職責(zé)，我閱讀了關(guān)于環(huán)保的書(shū)后有很大變化，接下來(lái)介紹我過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在在環(huán)保方面有什么樣的變化，最后作為中學(xué)生我們應(yīng)如何保護(hù)環(huán)境。此處in the past, throw away, used to, on foot, try to do sth, remember to do sth, turn off等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。16．（四川中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)目前，學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重，請(qǐng)圍繞以下要點(diǎn)談?wù)勂渲性蛞约皞€(gè)人建議。原因： 看法與建議：； ，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮； 。 要求： 80100； ； ，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。________________________________________________________________________________【答案】At present, a number of middle school students have picked up a bad habitcheating in examinations.There are three main reasons. First, schools have given students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. Second, some students are not hardworking and they don39。t work hard at their lessons. Third, they waste a lot of time playing games or surfing the Internet. So they haven39。t enough time to prepare for the exams. Finally, students have to do so to make their teachers and parents happy.In my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our study. We students should be honest and diligent, and only in this way can we improve our study and make progress. Besides, our teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for ourselves.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：本文需要就考試作弊這一主題展開(kāi)討論。具體需要圍繞考試作弊的原因展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作，原因已經(jīng)給出來(lái)了，有以下幾點(diǎn)： 。寫(xiě)完原因后還要提出自己的看法和建議，具體內(nèi)容也已給出：；，學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)奮；。寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容上難度不大，需要把更多精力放在語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性和文章的連貫性上面。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：第一段總起描述了現(xiàn)在存在的作弊現(xiàn)象，用到了一些較好的短語(yǔ)，如picked up a bad habit（養(yǎng)成了一個(gè)壞習(xí)慣）。第二段對(duì)原因進(jìn)行了闡述，借助了first，second，third等詞使得原因的陳述連貫起來(lái)。一些短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，如waste a lot of time playing games（浪費(fèi)時(shí)間在玩游戲上），prepare for the exams（準(zhǔn)備考試）。最后一段闡明了自己的看法（In my opinion），句式上面有創(chuàng)新，用到了一處倒裝句（only in this way can we improve our study and make progress），強(qiáng)調(diào)了不能作弊，只有以誠(chéng)實(shí)和勤奮的方式我們才能進(jìn)步?？傮w來(lái)說(shuō)文章寫(xiě)作較為流暢，有許多亮點(diǎn)。17．（天津中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá) 假設(shè)你叫李明，曾榮幸成為天津國(guó)際馬拉松賽的一名志愿者。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，用英文寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，談?wù)勥@一段美好的經(jīng)歷。（1）年4月國(guó)際馬拉松賽在天津舉行；（2）作為志愿者，賽前接受了培訓(xùn)；（3）在閑暇時(shí)間里，和運(yùn)動(dòng)員用英語(yǔ)交談，為他們提供幫助；（4）和許多運(yùn)動(dòng)員成為了朋友，也了解了許多不同的文化；（5）你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：志愿者 volunteer要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）演講稿的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon________________________________________________________【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,.Before the game, volunteers were given a training. In our spare time, we talked to the athletes in English to help we are friends with many the same time,we also learn about many different cultures.I think the experience is good for me.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如be glad to do，talk about，Tianjin International Marathon，hold on，in spare time，talk to，in English，at the same time，learn about，different cultures，be good for等。而Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,./Before the game, volunteers were given a think the experience is good for ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，語(yǔ)態(tài)多樣，表達(dá)流暢，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。18．（福建中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)隨著電子時(shí)代的到來(lái)，西方文化如潮水般涌來(lái)，中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。有人認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要。假如你是Mike,請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封郵件，給你校英文報(bào)投稿寫(xiě)一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右，談?wù)勀銓?duì)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍?duì)開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing……，it’s necessary for schools to……，we shouldn’t……，They can raise……，it is of great importance to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化面對(duì)的問(wèn)題，接下來(lái)介紹我認(rèn)為開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的必要性的原因，最后號(hào)召更多的學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課。此處because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。19．（山西農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)附屬學(xué)校中考模擬）書(shū)面表達(dá)社會(huì)需要愛(ài)，時(shí)代呼喚愛(ài)。對(duì)善行、對(duì)愛(ài)心的感動(dòng)，存在于每個(gè)人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感動(dòng)，而是一種顯示感動(dòng)的勇氣。請(qǐng)為你身邊的人或事點(diǎn)贊，讓“點(diǎn)贊”成為傳遞正能量的一種行動(dòng)吧！是什么行為讓你點(diǎn)贊？講述一件你點(diǎn)贊的事情。你從他/她身上可以學(xué)到什么？讓我們一起分享吧！請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇文章。注意：1．詞數(shù)：80左右；2．不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名及校名。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “l(fā)ike” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “l(fā)ike” buttonWhat could you learn from him/her? 【答案】I should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works I grow up, I want to