【正文】 onsenseLi Lei is a very good student。 He is _________________________________________________【答案】Li Lei is a very good student. He is good at studying and ready to help others so he gets on well with his classmates.Last week a new student called Wang Gang came to his class and Mr. Zhang made him sit next to Li Lei. But Wang Gang is weak in learning and loves talking in class. This made teachers angry Some of the students wouldn’t like to make friends with him. But Li Lei helps him study and stops him talking nonsense in class. After some time, they made great progress together.If I share a desk with this slow student like Wang Gang, I will help him patiently and learn from each other.【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，介紹李磊如何幫助差生王剛以及如果你的身邊有和王剛一樣的差生，你會如何做。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如be good at, be ready to do, get on well with, be weak in, make friends with, make great progress, share with, learn from以及過去分詞作后置定語。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c睛】寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符合要求。構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。15．（浙江中考模擬）書面表達在本周班會課上，同學們對“初中生什么時候放學比較合適？”這一問題進行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學認為初中生應該在5點左右放學，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。請你寫一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 o’clockat 4:45at 5 o’clock...exercise to keep healthy and read booksdo what we want, such as listening to musictake a parttime job...注意：（1）短文必須包括表格中所有要點，并適當發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)：80100；（4）短文開頭僅供參考，不計入總詞數(shù)。短文開頭：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而復雜并列結構They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ，豐富了短文內容，使表達多樣化；同時Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。16．（江蘇中考模擬）書面表達常州市政府發(fā)文，從年2月1日起，市區(qū)禁止燃放煙花爆竹。你們班級的同學們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進行了討論。請根據(jù)表格所提供的信息,給市長寫一封信介紹大家的觀點，同時談談自己的想法。注意： 1. 所寫內容必須包括表格中的信息，并適當發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校名稱；3. 表達，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4. 詞數(shù)不少于90。文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。AGREEDISAGREE原 因1．減少空氣和噪音污染，保護環(huán)境……2．可能引起安全問題。如，火災……3．……（發(fā)揮至少一點）1．千百年來已經(jīng)習慣燃放煙花2．沒有煙花，過春節(jié)更無趣3．……你的觀點……（自擬至少兩個觀點）Dear Major,We have had a discussion about whether to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. All the students in our class give the ideas. 【答案】Most of the students don’t agree to let off fireworks at Spring Festival. They think fireworks produce so much smoke that it can cause serious air pollution. What’s more, people like letting them off at midnight, it is always so noisy outside that many people can’t sleep well. Also, it may cause big fire if people aren’t careful enough. Some children like playing with fireworks, so it’s dangerous for their eyes. If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere.On the other hand, some students don’t agree. They think Chinese people have been used to letting off fireworks since hundreds years ago. Moreover, Chinese traditional culture is missing. We should protect it. People will feel less interested than before without fireworks.I think we should follow the rule because good environment is more important than anything else. Protecting environment is protecting ourselves.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。常州市政府發(fā)文，從年2月1日起，市區(qū)禁止燃放煙花爆竹。你們班級的同學們就春節(jié)是否能燃放煙花進行了討論。請根據(jù)表格所提供的信息,給市長寫一封信介紹大家的觀點，同時談談自己的想法。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱主要為第三人稱和第一人稱。仔細閱讀所給材料，認真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)主題和所給要點列出提綱，所寫內容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當發(fā)揮，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。盡量使用高分句型。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。根據(jù)提示要點，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱： 大多數(shù)學生不同意在春節(jié)放煙花。他們認為煙花產(chǎn)生的煙太多，會造成嚴重的空氣污染。更重要的是，人們喜歡在午夜放假，外面總是那么吵，很多人睡不好覺。另外，如果人們不夠小心，可能會引起大火。有些孩子喜歡玩煙花，這對他們的眼睛很危險。如果我們不放煙花，清潔工就不需要到處清理那么多垃圾。 另一方面，有些學生不同意。他們認為中國人幾百年前就習慣放煙花了。此外，中國傳統(tǒng)文化也缺失了。我們應該保護它。如果沒有煙花，人們會比以前更不感興趣。 我認為我們應該遵守這條規(guī)則，因為良好的環(huán)境比其他任何東西都重要。保護環(huán)境就是保護我們自己?！军c睛】本文思路清晰，時態(tài)運用要正確，敘述清楚條里，層次分明，所用句式句型比較高級，像If we don’t let off fireworks, cleaners don’t need to clean up so much rubbish everywhere./ They think Chinese people have been used